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Spring Death

a finch lays dead now crashed into my window- nature seeks balance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/6/2021 12:44:00 PM
So true that nature is a give and take ~ no judgement. Congrats on your win, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 3/6/2021 2:27:00 PM
Line, your Buddhist understanding certainly shows here, as you know, all things seek balance. Thanks ever so for your kind visit. Always an enlightenment.
Date: 3/3/2021 10:40:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 3/4/2021 9:58:00 AM
Beata, your comments are always kind and most appreciated.
Date: 3/3/2021 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ~ Mala
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Greg Gaul
Date: 3/4/2021 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Mala for your visit and for including me. Namaste.
Date: 6/20/2018 11:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:51:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:13:00 PM
You are so kind to recognize my work. Thank you so much. You make me smile. And that's poetic.
Date: 6/15/2018 12:12:00 PM
Nicely done haiku, Greg, love the imagery! Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~' *
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:49:00 PM
Greg, your work is not a little ditty.. but very creative and real life.. thank you for your inspiring complement
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:12:00 PM
Eve, I see your poetry all around and fine work it is. Thank you so much for noticing my little ditty. Your comments are most appreciated.
Date: 6/15/2018 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations for your win. I know what it is like with birds flying into windows.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:09:00 PM
How considerate of you to notice my work Heidi. I recognize your fine poetry as well. Appreciate your kind words.
Date: 6/15/2018 9:21:00 AM
I love how unsettling this piece is. Congratulations on your placement in my contest Greg! A wonderful impacting write. Thank you for your support! xomo
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:08:00 PM
Maureen you were most kind to recognize my little verse. Thank you so much for running such an interesting and intelligent contest. Keep inking and thinking with joy.
Date: 6/15/2018 8:58:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this beautifully penned haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:06:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks Constance. Nature can be brutal but we needn't be. Your thoughtful comment is most appreciated, I've admired your work for some time.
Date: 4/23/2018 12:14:00 PM
a very touching poem, Greg. Sounds like nature trying to guilt trip us, not you personally but humanity in general... well, those who have a conscience.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/23/2018 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Line for your comment. You'll notice I had to put a title on it to get it up on the site. One of the guidelines of your Haiku summit group I had to set aside. Overall though, thanks for your advice.