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Spring Death

a finch lays dead now crashed into my window- nature seeks balance

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2021 12:44:00 PM

So true that nature is a give and take ~ no judgement. Congrats on your win, Greg.

Greg Gaul
Date: 3/6/2021 2:27:00 PM

Line, your Buddhist understanding certainly shows here, as you know, all things seek balance. Thanks ever so for your kind visit. Always an enlightenment.

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/3/2021 10:40:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Greg Gaul
Date: 3/4/2021 9:58:00 AM

Beata, your comments are always kind and most appreciated.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/3/2021 7:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ~ Mala

Greg Gaul
Date: 3/4/2021 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Mala for your visit and for including me. Namaste.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/20/2018 11:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2018 12:51:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:13:00 PM

You are so kind to recognize my work. Thank you so much. You make me smile. And that's poetic.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/15/2018 12:12:00 PM

Nicely done haiku, Greg, love the imagery! Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~' *

Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2018 9:49:00 PM

Greg, your work is not a little ditty.. but very creative and real life.. thank you for your inspiring complement

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:12:00 PM

Eve, I see your poetry all around and fine work it is. Thank you so much for noticing my little ditty. Your comments are most appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/15/2018 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations for your win. I know what it is like with birds flying into windows.

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:09:00 PM

How considerate of you to notice my work Heidi. I recognize your fine poetry as well. Appreciate your kind words.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/15/2018 9:21:00 AM

I love how unsettling this piece is. Congratulations on your placement in my contest Greg! A wonderful impacting write. Thank you for your support! xomo

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:08:00 PM

Maureen you were most kind to recognize my little verse. Thank you so much for running such an interesting and intelligent contest. Keep inking and thinking with joy.

Constance La France

Date: 6/15/2018 8:58:00 AM

Greg, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this beautifully penned haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/15/2018 9:06:00 PM

Thank you for your kind remarks Constance. Nature can be brutal but we needn't be. Your thoughtful comment is most appreciated, I've admired your work for some time.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/23/2018 12:14:00 PM

a very touching poem, Greg. Sounds like nature trying to guilt trip us, not you personally but humanity in general... well, those who have a conscience.

Greg Gaul
Date: 4/23/2018 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Line for your comment. You'll notice I had to put a title on it to get it up on the site. One of the guidelines of your Haiku summit group I had to set aside. Overall though, thanks for your advice.