Spring Break Up

It is an impressive break up.
The maestro conducts a symphony that
crushes eardrums with locomotive rumbling, 
thumping, bumping, and dumping 
of large chunks of cracking, crackling 
crystalline ice pushing down river.

	Hundreds of tons of ice come together –
		hopefully without devastation. 

It is an environment of change.
In soto voce, soft rippling rivulets, 
icicles dribbling, dripping droplets,
the slushing of crusted, melting snow.
Snowshoe hares, squirrels, and wolverine
emerge into full Spring activity. 

	Mush dogs’ serenades ride the winds,
		yipping and campaigning for dinner.

Time to secure Winter’s store of firewood,
move boats and fish wheels to higher ground.
Time to hunt and gather fresh food for stores.
Time to begin restocking fresh meats of
muskrat, beaver, duck, goose, and swan.
Time to rebuild and repair. 

	Break up – 
		one of the best times of the year.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Pettit Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 5:24 PM
Very descriptive write about the breakup of winter's ice. With temperatures around 20c, it looks as if spring has finally arrived.
Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:00 PM
So nice of you to visit with nice comments Robert. I'm glad spring is here. :) Linda
Sands Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Wow! What a great poem to be led to today. So well done Linda! Exciting to read :)
Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:55 PM
Many thanks Heidi! I appreciate your nice comments. :) Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:50 AM
What a great description of spring. Some original meats too.
Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Thank you friend Victor. I'm glad I live in the South. If you want truly off-grid, North is the place to go...challenging life. :) Linda
Devonshire Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:45 AM
What a special view of spring's thaw, Linda! Your lines about the dogs recalled Jack London's "Call of the Wild." (I've never eaten the meats you mention, but I bet Native American tribes have.) Thank you for taking me on a journey North! Hugs, Carolyn
Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Carolyn. Jack London's books are great - "Call of the Wild" is a favorite. I'm glad you had a great journey;) Thanks for stopping and taking time to comment! hugs Linda
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Wonderful spring images Linda. Much exuberance in the sights and sounds you created in this poem.
Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Oh so many thanks Vijay. I'm glad you enjoyed it and appreciate your kind comments. :) Linda
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