Spring Birds

Hummingbird’s perch sipping fresh liquid gold,
while their wings flutter in luminous green.
Soon to be zipping, zooming, flying bold.
Sunlight brightens their tiny plumes to sheen.

Purple finches feed on sunflower seeds,
while joyously singing their whistling song.
Songbirds join their chorus of trilling speeds,
now perched feeding, preening, they won't be long.

Red Robins frolic upon the wet ground,
welcoming their chirping sounds of delight.
Busily looking for worms to be found,
enjoying their jolly Spring feeding plight.

Sounds of joyous songbirds welcome in Spring,
rejoicing summer will soon be in swing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 7:38 PM
Thanks for sharing this info about Spring Birds, poetically expressed. God bless you.
Kitchin Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Beata, thank you.
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February 8, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Tania, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (9). Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Hummingbirds, Purple Finches, and Red Robins—thank you for your delightful depiction of "Spring Birds."
Kitchin Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 4:06 PM
Mark, thank you.
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January 31, 2025 at 4:31 AM
I love your garden of spring birds dear poet. So refreshing. Happy writing.
Kitchin Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 12:48 PM
Thriveni, thank you.
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May 15, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations Tania! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your placement. Although many good poems were submitted, your poem rose to the top ten. Well done, my friend Emile.
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 2:14 PM
Emile, thank you and thank you for my placement. It was a challenging contest and I enjoyed it.
Hamilton Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 6:50 PM
hi Tania I enjoyed reading this lovely poem good luck in contest hugs Shadow
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Shadow, thank you.
George Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 7:06 PM
With Spring comes an array of birds. All the birds you have mentioned here are my favorites.... humming birds , finches and red breasted robins. I had a pair of finches in my house for long. When one of them died, the other bird became so sad that I let it fly away. When birds sing together, the atmosphere becomes mellifluous with electric waves. Beautiful sonnet dear Tania....
Kitchin Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 7:15 PM
Valsa, thank you.
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May 4, 2024 at 12:19 PM
This is a beautiful, colorful poem of birds. It lights up the heart of all bird lovers. Good luck with the contest.
Kitchin Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Hilda, thank you.
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April 30, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Tania, how I love the return of the birds and their songs in springtime! You have captured the dynamic power of spring to resuscitate life! So enjoyed your sonnet! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!
Kitchin Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 1:24 PM
Sam, thank you.
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April 29, 2024 at 10:07 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative Sonnet  write. "Beautiful" Have a fun day writing away.....................
Kitchin Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Paula, thank you.
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April 29, 2024 at 6:20 AM
Dear Tania, your poem dances with the energy of spring, showing natures wonderful life in full bloom. The imagery of hummingbirds sipping liquid gold and finches joyously singing evokes a sense of wonder and delight. I can almost feel the sun's warmth and hear the chorus of bird songs heralding the arrival of a new season. What a joyful ode to spring's awakening. - Blessings, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Daniel, thank you.
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April 29, 2024 at 5:19 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Tania! Hugs ~ Kim
Kitchin Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Kim, thank you.
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April 29, 2024 at 2:45 AM
What a great lovely poem you wrote. I love birds. Great alliteration too. Not to forget the imagery. Best for a win.
Kitchin Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 3:21 AM
Victor, thank you. -hugs
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April 28, 2024 at 1:27 PM
We're getting lots of birds in our garden now that winter is behind us. I love to hear them. Good luck in the contest Tania. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Tom, thank you.
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April 28, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Beautiful and uplifting poem on the return to nature in the spring. Fantastic work, Tania! It depicts a variety of birds going about their business throughout the growing and reviving season, including hummingbirds, purple finches, and crimson robins.
Kitchin Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 1:24 PM
Lasaad, thank you.
Lane Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 11:55 AM
I think I've seen more robins frolicking on the ground then I've ever seen they flying. They don't seem to be as plentiful as they once were. Enjoyed your spring poem, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Lin, thank you. - hugs
Meadows Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 11:38 AM
A lovely poem for Spring. Well done.
Kitchin Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Jeanette, thank you.
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