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Spring Afternoon

Warm spring afternoon robin hopping in my yard - worm darts in his hole!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 3/1/2009 10:12:00 AM
Cute poem! Yes, that worm better dart fash. Thank you for allowing me to smile with your words. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/21/2009 7:24:00 PM
Amy, your love for animals is reflected in this beautiful haiku! Thanks for sharing your experiences with your adopted kitty-cat. If only there were more people willing to open their hearts to such loving creatures. They bring us so much joy! I appreciate your comments on "Feline Survivor." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2009 2:38:00 PM
I love this image of spring it's my favorite time of the year~! i enjoy reading your work, and i want to thank you for your comments on my poem ; "Empty jar of pickles"
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Date: 2/17/2009 9:58:00 PM
spring haiku, always imprints a beautiful image! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/17/2009 8:03:00 PM
beautiful images ,thanks for commenting on my peom
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Date: 2/16/2009 3:24:00 PM
Perfect and lovely Haiku, Amy. I can't wait for Spring! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/14/2009 6:44:00 PM
I can't wait for Spring either. Robins are relentless in worm hunting. great haiku...Raul
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:18:00 PM
lol beautiful haiku. the last line made me smile-love and peace: james
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:12:00 PM
Spring will be here before you know it! Nice Haiku
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