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Spring Afternoon

Warm spring afternoon robin hopping in my yard - worm darts in his hole!

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Date: 3/1/2009 10:12:00 AM

Cute poem! Yes, that worm better dart fash. Thank you for allowing me to smile with your words. Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/21/2009 7:24:00 PM

Amy, your love for animals is reflected in this beautiful haiku! Thanks for sharing your experiences with your adopted kitty-cat. If only there were more people willing to open their hearts to such loving creatures. They bring us so much joy! I appreciate your comments on "Feline Survivor." Love, Carolyn

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/19/2009 2:38:00 PM

I love this image of spring it's my favorite time of the year~! i enjoy reading your work, and i want to thank you for your comments on my poem ; "Empty jar of pickles"

Arany P.

Date: 2/17/2009 9:58:00 PM

spring haiku, always imprints a beautiful image! ~ Arany

Barbara Washington

Date: 2/17/2009 8:03:00 PM

beautiful images ,thanks for commenting on my peom

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/16/2009 3:24:00 PM

Perfect and lovely Haiku, Amy. I can't wait for Spring! Love, Robin