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Spring Afternoon

Bees hover

       Pink blossoms open

                       Spring breeze

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Brian Strand

Date: 1/28/2009 11:57:00 PM

Excellent as is moment 'Barbara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words

Tyler Martin

Date: 1/16/2009 9:20:00 AM

Nice haiku, I love writing them..Tyler

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/31/2008 9:05:00 AM

Great picture painted with this write, Barbara. Love, Nigel

Date: 12/30/2008 2:56:00 PM

We must have gotten another 6 inches of now today. I'm ready for spring!! Nice use of imagery here. I enjoyed it. Karen

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/29/2008 5:18:00 PM

Images of sound, smell and colour adorn this sweet HAIKU! BRAVO Barbara!! Love, Keith

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/29/2008 3:49:00 PM

Barbara - One of my favorite times of the year - Barbara may the coming year bring many blessings to you and those that you love, MJ

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/29/2008 8:36:00 AM

Got me thinking Spring. Gorgeous imagery. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 12/29/2008 5:39:00 AM

Beautiful imagery flows from your words and few words they are too reflecting the talent of the poet. Very well written. Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/29/2008 2:38:00 AM

Ahhhh, how refreshing on this wintery day! Like a breath of fresh air. :) Love, Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/28/2008 8:38:00 PM

Beeg, Great Haiku A little early for my side of the country but I shall read it every day for the next 4 months Xliamp LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/28/2008 7:29:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku great thinking during winter! Laura :) Happy New Year!

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/28/2008 5:48:00 PM

Nice structure, you evoke my favorite season...Raul

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/28/2008 5:26:00 PM

That is a sign i look forward to. Love this Haiku and the shape of it. Well written.

Spring Afternoon

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