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Spring New Beginnings

Such a beautiful sight a valley of snowdrops, white heads nodding in approval of our love. We wander hand in hand no more lookng back, just forward, stepping into the Spring time and the wonders of the new. tiny sprouting leaves flowers nodding downwards ... spring morning Walking together in the countryside, we stop and kiss, just so happy to be together at last, lambs with bobbing tails watch tentatively, nervously bleating for their mam's shelter . A lone donkey in with a full of horses with their foals, is so happy as he feeds. in green pastures horses are grazing ... springtime feeds the eyes Our love has stood the test of time, new beginnings spring forth. Looking towards the winter of our lives together. a glowing sun sinks awaking lonely hearts ... love blooms

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Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2013 6:27:00 PM

congrats on your win Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Joseph ..Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2013 4:06:00 PM

((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 5:59:00 PM

Many Thanks Sara .....Seren

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2013 8:07:00 PM

Warm congratulations on your win, Seren. Love, Annalise

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2013 4:15:00 PM

Yours was so sweet and I remember your haiku. Jut love them!! Congrats.

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:00:00 PM

LOL me and my Haiku, they dont come easy for me ...Seren

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/6/2013 1:49:00 PM

I like where you took the spring...into the winter of years !! Enjoyable, uplifing prose and haiku !! Congrats on your win !!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 5:58:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it ...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2013 9:42:00 PM

Seren, ;-) Congratulations with your nice winning poem in Debbie's "Spring haibun" contest... xox~LINDA

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/6/2013 1:00:00 AM

Thanks Linda ....Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/5/2013 7:15:00 PM

Thanks for the entry! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/5/2013 8:56:00 PM

Thank you Debbie, nice surprise....Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 2/12/2013 3:59:00 AM

Well if it's just a poem it's a nice one. However, I hope this.poem isn't just a poem one day. Maybe it's a small hope, that turns into a possibility. Some people are facing winters that I can't imagine, but that doesn't mean spring will never come. This poem contains a message of hope, love enduring to the awakening of hearts. Nice poem Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/12/2013 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Wayland....Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2013 8:26:00 AM

these are good,, so good, that last Haiku is a classic, as indeed is the rest of this poetry...

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/12/2013 1:27:00 PM

thanks for your comments Harry...Seren

David Williams

Date: 2/8/2013 4:27:00 PM

Seren love this, is this a new beginning in life for you?....David

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/8/2013 7:15:00 PM

No David, just a poem i am sorry to say.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2013 3:43:00 PM

Beautiful, Seren!! and you got three haiku in it too! I like in the first haiku how growing time can also be the symbol of two in love and starting out.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/8/2013 7:17:00 PM

hmmm yes its getting there, the Haiku's need work on them I believe