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Spring hopes

Weary souls await the coming of spring When life is renewed and temperatures rise They long for warmer days and skies of blue A blizzard had just come out of the blue Dashing the hopes of many for an early spring Old man winter from his slumber did rise From this blanket of white their hopes would rise And no longer would they have to feel blue Knowing that it wont be long before spring Spring fever is on the rise as gray skies turn blue For Andrea's Tritina contest

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Date: 8/5/2017 7:27:00 AM
I can relate to this one. Nicely done :)
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Date: 3/16/2013 5:46:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on a very fine win! Absolutely wonderful...hearts are yearning and we're almost there! : ) Annalise
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Date: 3/14/2013 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph...awesome write...Donna
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:35:00 PM
JOSEPH, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:53:00 AM
I wish spring was on the rise here Joseph.. congrats on your win xx
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:36:00 AM
Joseph congrats on your win and yep goodbye winter...David
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:04:00 AM
Beautiful poem here Joseph!Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/10/2013 6:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Nicely done. Connie
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:06:00 AM
thanks for supporting my contest, Joseph. Sure love the springtime message of this one.
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Joseph May
Date: 3/10/2013 11:50:00 AM
thanks Andrea..glad I was able to place in your contest ....hurray for spring
Date: 3/8/2013 1:03:00 AM
superb write my friend Joseph, I like it..good luck in the contest. good day always!!
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Date: 2/13/2013 1:44:00 PM
wonderful visual poetry,, really like this...
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:20:00 AM
Goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 2/12/2013 9:35:00 PM
enjoyed the images in here, good luck in the contest..
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Date: 2/12/2013 8:16:00 PM
I'm not too familiar with the Sestina form Joseph, but the imagery is great. I Love your poem. Best of luck for the Winners' List. xxAnnalise
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Date: 2/12/2013 7:18:00 PM
Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening...a difficult form 6 verse of sx lines and 1 verse of three with the same 6 end words in different order check out the form dictionary. Light & love
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Date: 2/12/2013 5:26:00 PM
Spring is on the wing... nice poem... good luck in the contest... Terry
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Date: 2/12/2013 4:31:00 PM
I know I've got the spring fever... I'm ready for shorts and tank top weather!! Love your poem :)
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Date: 2/12/2013 3:56:00 PM
Almost like a spring tune.....nice
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Date: 2/12/2013 12:29:00 PM
I've had this fever for a while now, Joseph. - Love the poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/12/2013 1:58:00 PM
thank you Anne.....hugs