Spring Butterfly

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skipper unnoticed mid white rays', sun kissed nectar pursuit of pleasure 9/16/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2017 6:41:00 PM

I love this one, Eve!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 9/17/2017 4:41:00 PM

Lovely, why do I have the taste for a peach or grapes or something? HA! HA! I love it thanks for sharing James :D

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/17/2017 1:03:00 PM

Absolutely, delightful. Loved that very first line. I guess the skipper didn't go totally unnoticed, for you have included him in your write. :) Hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2017 8:15:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Eve--lovely sun kissed nectar!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/17/2017 6:17:00 AM

They desire the wondrous nectar of each freely giving flower! And they share it with all other plants as well, such a giving soul the butterfly is! I love butterflies! And your write is one that describes their wondrous ability to skip along from flower to flower! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem here this morning! What a fabulous piece, one that I will remember! Great Work!!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/17/2017 12:17:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this morning Eve.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/16/2017 9:22:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku!