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Spring Easter Haiku

the chickadee tweets
I eat my breakfast
without an egg


wings flutter 
upon melting icicles
first glimpse of Spring


Grandma's garden
a missing rose lay
on her stone

Incense wafts
amongst the silent crowd
a sneeze out loud


longing
another Spring blooms 
without you 









Happy Easter to you and yours with love -Charma

Copyright © Charmaine Chircop | Year Posted 2016

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Thomas Martin Date: 4/14/2016 5:52:00 PM Wonderful sequence, charmaine! Loved your expertise. thanks for stopping my poetry. Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/9/2016 8:50:00 PM You're the one of the best haiku poets on the site, Charmaine. You always capture wonderful moments, sticking to simple language (which I personally think is key!), with "a-has" at the end. Some of these very funny, others sad, and others can kinda be taken both ways ... a sneeze out loud. It made me think of those Asian funerals that burn incense to honor the dead, and then someone sneezing on accident ... very awkward! Login to Reply Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/10/2016 3:09:00 PM Lol : )... It was a mauning Thursday when it happened. ..so another kind of ceremony...Am laughing cuz I have a phobia towards seeing bodies of dead people. .Now am imagining me there at that funeral sneezin out loud : )

Daver Austin Date: 3/31/2016 12:37:00 PM Love these, especially the third one. Love, daver Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/27/2016 7:00:00 PM charma, no one does KU like YOU. Why oh why can't they? A FAVE on thee. Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 3/27/2016 9:45:00 AM Love the haikus Charmaine. Happy Easter and Peace nice lady:) Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/27/2016 12:46:00 AM Sad, funny, observant and original. I enjoyed your haikus. Hugs Rock. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/27/2016 12:35:00 AM Enjoyed your Easter haiku Charma.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/26/2016 10:37:00 PM If you dont eat the egg, you can celebrate Easter with your chick!! ok that was kinda for Tim, but I loved your haiku! :) Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 3/26/2016 7:55:00 PM Happy Easter Charma...the first...I love the chickadee without eggs : ) ...the second...I can picture the hummingbird and the ice melt dripping...the third...is very heartfelt especially around the holidays... Be Blessed young lady. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 3/26/2016 8:03:00 PM or a departed love one Tim Smith Date: 3/26/2016 7:57:00 PM You added a fourth....very romantic but a bit of sadness