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My first attempt at a Haiku - hope you like it

Jan

Spring is in the air Birds nesting, new life hatching Best time of the year ~ Please see notes above ~

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Michelle Smith

Date: 5/6/2023 4:14:00 PM

Or, about birds, this couplet: Mr. Robin Goes to Work--- "In his navy blue coat with cap/ & donning a smart auburn vest/ Mr. Robin flew off in a hurry--/ leaving the Missus to nest :) "

Michelle Smith

Date: 5/6/2023 4:13:00 PM

Nice. :) My Spring haiku is: Winter is not Forever-- " 'Spring will soon blossom!'/ Mr. Squirrel hoped to survive/ Nibbling tulip bulbs."

Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/13/2015 6:53:00 PM

Jan, you did an awesome job!!!! Loved this Haiku. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2015 1:09:00 AM

Thanks Cynthia:-) Hugs jan xx

Maxine Jones

Date: 3/18/2014 3:09:00 PM

Aint it just! xx Maxine xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2014 5:56:00 PM

Can't wait for our 2 days of summer Max xxxx Jan xxx

Daver Austin

Date: 3/17/2014 12:14:00 PM

Yes, wonderful, but in Michigan we are still feeling like below zero. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2014 12:41:00 PM

Ohhh Daver, despite the British Weather I'd rather have this than snow - hope it warms up for you soon. Hugs, Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/15/2014 8:05:00 PM

Beautiful short tribute to spring! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2014 8:20:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Matthew. Just wish Spring would hurry up and arrive and then we have the couple of days of 'British Summer' to look forward to. Jan xxx

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2014 9:52:00 PM

Your first attempt is a big success. The spring equinox is about a week away, but it can't come soon enough for me.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 5:05:00 AM

Thank you Robert! I always value your comments and that is praise indeed.Joining this site has been the best thing I have ever done :-) Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2014 6:36:00 AM

- An Excellent work - Beautiful, Jan !! - "Best time of the year"...AGREE !!! -oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2014 6:42:00 AM

Oh thank you so much Anne Lise - love your new picture too! I am learning so much since I joined and making some wonderful on line friends. I am truly blessed xxx Jan x