Spring

Bobbing boats spring blows own trumpet: wave maker

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David Williams

Date: 2/23/2013 8:14:00 AM

Seren nice haiku...David

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/25/2013 5:31:00 PM

Thank you David ....Seren

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/22/2013 7:00:00 AM

Beautifully written. Oh how I can't wait until winter is over.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/23/2013 1:40:00 AM

Me too Connie....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 1:06:00 AM

that is so cool to say wave maker. This is how to make a cute twist in a haiku, Seren. And it can have a double meaning as well!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/22/2013 2:15:00 AM

Wow did i do it right Andrea

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/21/2013 11:24:00 PM

I think this intriguing write is fantastic my friend! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, quite the masterful poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/25/2013 5:32:00 PM

Thanks again Russell....Seren