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Image result for pictures of golden sun rays peeking through green leaves and white blooms on star magnolia For Suzette's contest. Written: March, 14, 2026

spring

the bright golden rays and orb
upon the horizon shines
gold peeks through magnolia
reveals green and white divine

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sara Etgen-Baker

March 19, 2026 at 5:26 PM

just lovely words...grateful for spring...my favorite season,

Sara Kendrick

March 19, 2026 at 5:43 PM

Yes, the first glimmers of spring brought joy. It is one of my favorite seasons except for the fact I have allergy problems. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

March 18, 2026 at 1:19 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "spring" write. Short/Sweet. The way I love them. Pretty Picture... Spring will be here very soon. Hooray!!! Have a wonderful day writing away............

Sara Kendrick

March 18, 2026 at 3:23 PM

We have pollen galore, so spring is here. Each time I go into town with my daughter everything has put out even more. Sara K.

Ken Martin

March 17, 2026 at 3:36 PM

Beautifully done, bravo. How did you come to terms with spring this year, like last year's summer ended?

Sara Kendrick

March 17, 2026 at 4:54 PM

Ken, spring here where I live has been up and down. It is back cold here today and will be again tonight. We never know until around the middle of April if we've had our last frost. My husband passed in October last year so it has been close to 5 months since his death and I am still having to deal with adjusting to this loss in my life. Sara K