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Spring



Awaken to citrine sky as   
Birds are heaven bound 
Canvas rich true complementary colors spun.
Delight sensation of sweet scent does tease,
Enchanting pink sunshade trees intertwine
Fervor poetic strokes in cherry blossoms.
Glide through, as time sweeps away a
Humble early morning light.
Impressionistic intrinsic appearance, 
Jitter to tomorrow’s mystic splendor.

12/16/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 6:33 PM
'Citrine sky'.... I like it. "Canvas rich true complementary colors spun. Delight sensation of sweet scent does tease," Like to imagine the canvas of the sky in multi colors adorn. Lovely ambiance of the early morning sky. Beautiful poem, dear Eve.
Empress Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Beautiful abc written here in such a flawless manner dear eve. I love so many lines here but “ Fervor poetic strokes in cherry blossoms. Glide through, as time sweeps away a Humble early morning “ stood out for me as it is so evocatively exquisite. Time… something we could write about always moving ways. Sending you light always. Hope Christmas is going well for you
Baker Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 5:42 PM
A lovely ABC poem, Eve. the imagery and colors were a beautiful enhancement to your poem. Thanks for writing in this creative form, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Pretty! Lovely use of colors!
Poet Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Eve, your writing is truly delightful. It serves as a remarkable source of inspiration, evoking thoughts of spring even in the midst of winter.
One Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 8:08 AM
This is lovely Eve... Hope you are well..
Sharma  Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Oh my, this is such an enchanting ABC form poem which captures such gorgeous descriptions within its layers.. Ahh, my heart is mesmerized by the beauty of your words here.. "Awaken to citrine sky" The use of colours here is absolutely impeccable which hues an eloquent tapestry of imageries on the canvas of reader's heart.. "Enchanting pink sunshade trees intertwine", "poetic strokes in cherry blossoms", "Canvas rich true complementary colors spun." Wowww, a true FAV for me :) sending you light!
Pandit Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 5:08 AM
So pleasant a write, Eve. Quite an inspiration to think of spring midst winter.
Cunningham Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 12:29 AM
The season we all look forward to Eve. It can't come quick enough. Tom
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