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Awaken to citrine sky as Birds are heaven bound Canvas rich true complementary colors spun. Delight sensation of sweet scent does tease, Enchanting pink sunshade trees intertwine Fervor poetic strokes in cherry blossoms. Glide through, as time sweeps away a Humble early morning light. Impressionistic intrinsic appearance, Jitter to tomorrow’s mystic splendor. 12/16/2023

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Date: 12/25/2023 6:33:00 PM
'Citrine sky'.... I like it. "Canvas rich true complementary colors spun. Delight sensation of sweet scent does tease," Like to imagine the canvas of the sky in multi colors adorn. Lovely ambiance of the early morning sky. Beautiful poem, dear Eve.
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Date: 12/20/2023 11:35:00 AM
Beautiful Eve. I wish it was here already
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Date: 12/19/2023 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful abc written here in such a flawless manner dear eve. I love so many lines here but “ Fervor poetic strokes in cherry blossoms. Glide through, as time sweeps away a Humble early morning “ stood out for me as it is so evocatively exquisite. Time… something we could write about always moving ways. Sending you light always. Hope Christmas is going well for you
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Date: 12/18/2023 5:42:00 PM
A lovely ABC poem, Eve. the imagery and colors were a beautiful enhancement to your poem. Thanks for writing in this creative form, my friend. Bill
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Date: 12/17/2023 7:12:00 PM
Pretty! Lovely use of colors!
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Date: 12/17/2023 10:49:00 AM
Eve, your writing is truly delightful. It serves as a remarkable source of inspiration, evoking thoughts of spring even in the midst of winter.
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Date: 12/17/2023 8:08:00 AM
This is lovely Eve... Hope you are well..
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Date: 12/17/2023 7:31:00 AM
Oh my, this is such an enchanting ABC form poem which captures such gorgeous descriptions within its layers.. Ahh, my heart is mesmerized by the beauty of your words here.. "Awaken to citrine sky" The use of colours here is absolutely impeccable which hues an eloquent tapestry of imageries on the canvas of reader's heart.. "Enchanting pink sunshade trees intertwine", "poetic strokes in cherry blossoms", "Canvas rich true complementary colors spun." Wowww, a true FAV for me :) sending you light!
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Date: 12/17/2023 5:08:00 AM
So pleasant a write, Eve. Quite an inspiration to think of spring midst winter.
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Date: 12/17/2023 12:29:00 AM
The season we all look forward to Eve. It can't come quick enough. Tom
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