Spring

A friend of Summer,
The neighbor of harsh Winter;
The cousin of Fall.

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Daniel Neal

Date: 2/11/2009 2:44:00 PM

Nice sequence of Spring, Summer, Winter, and Fall. DN

Arany P.

Date: 2/6/2009 3:45:00 AM

beautiful haiku... love it! ~ Arany

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/3/2009 3:10:00 AM

Nice work in incorporating all the seasons. Tyler

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/3/2009 2:50:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, you put your creative mind to work with this one..............Danielle

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/2/2009 5:32:00 PM

I am also a friend of Summer and I hate its neighbor...........nice

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/1/2009 10:04:00 PM

Spring has a mean neighbor and a good friend, but I am in love with its cousin. Love Elizabeth

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 2/1/2009 6:53:00 AM

I like the organization of this poem. Well thought out and expressed.very well written also. Have a wonderful day! :) Lucinda

Brian Strand

Date: 2/1/2009 12:31:00 AM

A good relation to have Raul.Rgds Brian

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/1/2009 12:22:00 AM

Great haiku, you're quite the visionary.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 1/31/2009 11:36:00 PM

This is great! Seasons seen as our reality and community. Clever.

Date: 1/31/2009 7:30:00 PM

Interesting interaction between the seasons in this poem. I enjoyed the creativity you employeed in this concise form. Gave me a chance to smile. Blessings to you for that. Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/31/2009 4:55:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful, Raul, in every way. Execellent Haiku! Love, always, Robin

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/31/2009 4:52:00 PM

I love this..making the seasons related..creative write.

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/31/2009 2:39:00 PM

So clever Raul! Very unique haiku of a favorite relative season. : ) . Love, shar

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/31/2009 2:06:00 PM

Your Haiku season has SPRUNG to life , Raul ...Well done ....