Spring

A friend of Summer,
The neighbor of harsh Winter;
The cousin of Fall.

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Daniel Neal

February 11, 2009 at 2:44 PM

Nice sequence of Spring, Summer, Winter, and Fall. DN

Arany P.

February 6, 2009 at 3:45 AM

beautiful haiku... love it! ~ Arany

Tyler Martin

February 3, 2009 at 3:10 AM

Nice work in incorporating all the seasons. Tyler

Danielle Moreno

February 3, 2009 at 2:50 AM

Beautiful haiku, you put your creative mind to work with this one..............Danielle

Abe Lopez

February 2, 2009 at 5:32 PM

I am also a friend of Summer and I hate its neighbor...........nice

Elizabeth Neal

February 1, 2009 at 10:04 PM

Spring has a mean neighbor and a good friend, but I am in love with its cousin. Love Elizabeth

Lucinda Bulger

February 1, 2009 at 6:53 AM

I like the organization of this poem. Well thought out and expressed.very well written also. Have a wonderful day! :) Lucinda

Brian Strand

February 1, 2009 at 12:31 AM

A good relation to have Raul.Rgds Brian

Steve Edmonds

February 1, 2009 at 12:22 AM

Great haiku, you're quite the visionary.

Iolanda Scripca

January 31, 2009 at 11:36 PM

This is great! Seasons seen as our reality and community. Clever.

January 31, 2009 at 7:30 PM

Interesting interaction between the seasons in this poem. I enjoyed the creativity you employeed in this concise form. Gave me a chance to smile. Blessings to you for that. Karen