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Spring - Time To Give Thanks

Green the colour of hope Tiny green buds start to emerge on dead looking branches Winter has not chilled the roots to desolation Life is anew just wait and see…… as spring launches Itself into our hearts, we wait for the colours filling the isolation That cold damp weather has brought. Yellows of daffodils and narcissus waving their heads in wonder As though looking around for the tulips and snowdrops A mass of colour here on the ground….our eyes skyward wander smiling at the shoots on the blossom trees, showing their crops Along with all the mighty trees of old Birds chirping in the watery sunlight Much as to say ….we are here too The wonder of Spring unwinds our love of life Time to start again …. time to renew Time to spring forth, time to give thanks. penned 16 March 2017

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Date: 3/31/2017 12:44:00 PM
Beautifully written, Seren! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/30/2017 11:35:00 AM
A lovely picture Seren, congratulations...
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Date: 3/29/2017 8:33:00 AM
Hi Seren, This is so lovely. You "capured" the beauty and magic Spring within this well written piece. You did everything that I asked for. Good content, imagery and rhyme. Thanks for participating in my "Spring Time" contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/16/2017 7:57:00 PM
Lovely, we just got over 70cm's snow, took me half a day just to shovel my way out of the house!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:16:00 PM
do u good .....Seren
Date: 3/16/2017 12:53:00 PM
What a delightful spring poem Seren - spring is well and truly on the way here:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:16:00 PM
thanks Jan...Seren
Date: 3/16/2017 8:35:00 AM
I'm ready for all this snow to melt and the beautiful colors to show.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:17:00 PM
bet u can see them now...Seren
Date: 3/16/2017 7:30:00 AM
Your beautiful words should be set to music. I love these lines:"as spring launches itself into our hearts, we wait for the colours filling the isolation . . ." Amitiés
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:15:00 PM
glad you liked it Anne-Marie it wasnt good enough for the placing list.....enjoyed writing it though...Seren

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