Balveen Cheema Poet Free verse

Spraying Beauty

Spraying Beauty

The burnished yellow sky crackles loud
Opening the golden gates of its honeyed dome
Freeing the invisible wind to cycle through the yellow mustard fields
Spraying its trails with scent and freshness of panoramic beauty 

March 4, 2016
Contest: United Colours - Yellow
Sponsor:  Silent One

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Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2016 at 11:33 PM Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA Balveen Cheema March 15, 2016 at 8:26 PM Thanks Linda!

Teddy Kimathi March 7, 2016 at 7:16 AM I wish I could see that beautiful imagery with my own eyes!!!! Congrats Balveen, for your placement in the Yellow Contest!!! ;-) Balveen Cheema March 15, 2016 at 8:27 PM How sweet of you, Teddy! Thanks!

Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 4:25 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema March 6, 2016 at 7:24 PM Thanks Jan! Love....

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 12:55 PM YOU wrote a very nice one. Congrats on the win. Balveen Cheema March 6, 2016 at 7:25 PM Glad you found it nice!

Hansteven Selfa March 6, 2016 at 12:12 AM Congratulations Balveen on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS Balveen Cheema March 6, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thanks Hansteven! Balveen Cheema March 6, 2016 at 5:57 AM Thanks Hansteven!

Connie Marcum Wong March 5, 2016 at 2:35 AM This is so lovely Balveen. It would be a top winner had you remembered to put the number of picture, I am sure. I also wrote a longer poem and had to shorten it. It kind of took away from the feeling I wanted. I posted the longer version that makes more sense now that this contest has been judged. Congratulations! #7 Balveen Cheema March 5, 2016 at 10:00 PM Thanks for showing your loving concern, Connie! Love you! Balveen

Eve Roper March 4, 2016 at 11:05 PM Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Balveen, great imagery !Hugs dear friend Balveen Cheema March 5, 2016 at 10:01 PM Love & thanks Eve!

Beautiful Scars March 4, 2016 at 4:27 PM Balveen, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo Balveen Cheema March 6, 2016 at 12:52 AM Thanks Laura!

Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 8:33 AM Balveen, this is B E A U T I F U L and wonderfully written, I am loving this 7~ Balveen Cheema March 6, 2016 at 5:55 AM Constance, many thanks for finding it beautiful!

Jan Allison March 4, 2016 at 4:44 AM beautiful imagery Balveen - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema March 6, 2016 at 5:56 AM Thanks & love, Jan!