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Spraying Beauty

Spraying Beauty

The burnished yellow sky crackles loud
Opening the golden gates of its honeyed dome
Freeing the invisible wind to cycle through the yellow mustard fields
Spraying its trails with scent and freshness of panoramic beauty 

March 4, 2016
Contest: United Colours - Yellow
Sponsor:  Silent One

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/14/2016 11:33:00 PM Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/15/2016 8:26:00 PM Thanks Linda!

Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/7/2016 7:16:00 AM I wish I could see that beautiful imagery with my own eyes!!!! Congrats Balveen, for your placement in the Yellow Contest!!! ;-) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/15/2016 8:27:00 PM How sweet of you, Teddy! Thanks!

Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2016 4:25:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/6/2016 7:24:00 PM Thanks Jan! Love....

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2016 12:55:00 PM YOU wrote a very nice one. Congrats on the win. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/6/2016 7:25:00 PM Glad you found it nice!

Hansteven Selfa Date: 3/6/2016 12:12:00 AM Congratulations Balveen on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/6/2016 8:50:00 AM Thanks Hansteven! Balveen Cheema Date: 3/6/2016 5:57:00 AM Thanks Hansteven!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/5/2016 2:35:00 AM This is so lovely Balveen. It would be a top winner had you remembered to put the number of picture, I am sure. I also wrote a longer poem and had to shorten it. It kind of took away from the feeling I wanted. I posted the longer version that makes more sense now that this contest has been judged. Congratulations! #7 Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/5/2016 10:00:00 PM Thanks for showing your loving concern, Connie! Love you! Balveen

Eve Roper Date: 3/4/2016 11:05:00 PM Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Balveen, great imagery !Hugs dear friend Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/5/2016 10:01:00 PM Love & thanks Eve!

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/4/2016 4:27:00 PM Balveen, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/6/2016 12:52:00 AM Thanks Laura!

Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 8:33:00 AM Balveen, this is B E A U T I F U L and wonderfully written, I am loving this 7~ Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/6/2016 5:55:00 AM Constance, many thanks for finding it beautiful!

Jan Allison Date: 3/4/2016 4:44:00 AM beautiful imagery Balveen - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/6/2016 5:56:00 AM Thanks & love, Jan!