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I’ve googled symptoms of 'diseasles'
As Peter has got awful sneezles
His todger is spotty
And so is his botty
I wonder if Pete’s got the measles

08/28/20

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Gershon Wolf

August 30, 2020 at 5:49 PM

So cute, Jan. I see what you mean now about making up words... Delightful! Thanks, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

August 29, 2020 at 6:20 PM

awesome word plays, Jan. Love this one too . Is it for the humorous limerick contest or is the other?

Emilia James

August 29, 2020 at 5:54 AM

Ha ha love this, made me chuckle. Emilia x

Regina Mcintosh

August 29, 2020 at 5:31 AM

Love this, Jan. You're such a creative talent and it shows through in every flavorful and enchanting poem you post. Love to you and blessings too..gina

Caren Krutsinger

August 28, 2020 at 11:59 PM

"diseasles" - so much fun, and then I got to the word "todger" and I could not stop laughing.

John Watt

August 28, 2020 at 5:31 PM

You are so, so clever Jan! Diseasles! Another classic limerick from your witty pen.

Jan Allison

September 4, 2020 at 10:16 AM

thanks John it was fun to create the silly words:-) hugs Jan x

Janice Canerdy

August 28, 2020 at 3:20 PM

A really GOOD one, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison

September 4, 2020 at 10:16 AM

thanks janice:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

August 28, 2020 at 2:58 PM

Visiting day at the soup, and I see you're still crating humorous limericks. Carry on, Jan.

Jan Allison

August 28, 2020 at 3:17 PM

oh Lin not seen you in ages I know you are so busy with your lovely little grand daughter. thanks for dropping by I do appreciate your comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Sharon Keely

August 28, 2020 at 12:06 PM

a spotty botty does sound like a scary diseasle! here's hoping the internet apothecary doesn't recommend a vinegary suppository??

Jan Allison

August 28, 2020 at 3:16 PM

lol thanks Sharon:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

August 28, 2020 at 11:38 AM

It does not seem to matter what disease a person has, but they all seem to have an innate need to share it with everyone else! I wish there was a cure for that! Good thing you got a receipt! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

August 28, 2020 at 11:42 AM

lol Rico its a pure fiction poem .. I heard a guy sneezing very loudly when we were out walking and this silly idea came into my head and i had to scribble down 4 lines before i forgot them:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 28, 2020 at 11:29 AM

Hello Allison, measles ! I wonder if he has the measles, something different. hugs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 29, 2020 at 12:16 PM

Hello Jan, the new parents should have their children vaccinated for this illness or they will get serious illness from not having the shot. Thes new parents do not undrstand this. Some children are born with the autisms. Hugs Darlene.

Jan Allison

August 28, 2020 at 11:31 AM

Measles can be so dangerous and with fewer having the mmr vaccination because of the fear of autism it is spreading rapidly:-( hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

August 28, 2020 at 10:08 AM

Haha good one jan, as if the virus wasnt enough lol. Tom

Jan Allison

August 28, 2020 at 10:19 AM

Yeah pure fiction - i was walking by the sea and heard someone sneeze and got the idea - I had to grab a pen and find a till receipt in my pocket to write it down lol. Hope you had a wonderful time in Wales it always rained when we used to go :-) hugs jan xx

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