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I’ve googled symptoms of 'diseasles' As Peter has got awful sneezles His todger is spotty And so is his botty I wonder if Pete’s got the measles 08/28/20

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/30/2020 5:49:00 PM

So cute, Jan. I see what you mean now about making up words... Delightful! Thanks, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2020 6:20:00 PM

awesome word plays, Jan. Love this one too . Is it for the humorous limerick contest or is the other?

Emilia James

Date: 8/29/2020 5:54:00 AM

Ha ha love this, made me chuckle. Emilia x

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/29/2020 5:31:00 AM

Love this, Jan. You're such a creative talent and it shows through in every flavorful and enchanting poem you post. Love to you and blessings too..gina

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/28/2020 11:59:00 PM

"diseasles" - so much fun, and then I got to the word "todger" and I could not stop laughing.

John Watt

Date: 8/28/2020 5:31:00 PM

You are so, so clever Jan! Diseasles! Another classic limerick from your witty pen.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2020 10:16:00 AM

thanks John it was fun to create the silly words:-) hugs Jan x

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/28/2020 3:20:00 PM

A really GOOD one, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2020 10:16:00 AM

thanks janice:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 8/28/2020 2:58:00 PM

Visiting day at the soup, and I see you're still crating humorous limericks. Carry on, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2020 3:17:00 PM

oh Lin not seen you in ages I know you are so busy with your lovely little grand daughter. thanks for dropping by I do appreciate your comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Sharon Keely

Date: 8/28/2020 12:06:00 PM

a spotty botty does sound like a scary diseasle! here's hoping the internet apothecary doesn't recommend a vinegary suppository??

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2020 3:16:00 PM

lol thanks Sharon:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/28/2020 11:38:00 AM

It does not seem to matter what disease a person has, but they all seem to have an innate need to share it with everyone else! I wish there was a cure for that! Good thing you got a receipt! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2020 11:42:00 AM

lol Rico its a pure fiction poem .. I heard a guy sneezing very loudly when we were out walking and this silly idea came into my head and i had to scribble down 4 lines before i forgot them:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/28/2020 11:29:00 AM

Hello Allison, measles ! I wonder if he has the measles, something different. hugs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/29/2020 12:16:00 PM

Hello Jan, the new parents should have their children vaccinated for this illness or they will get serious illness from not having the shot. Thes new parents do not undrstand this. Some children are born with the autisms. Hugs Darlene.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2020 11:31:00 AM

Measles can be so dangerous and with fewer having the mmr vaccination because of the fear of autism it is spreading rapidly:-( hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/28/2020 10:08:00 AM

Haha good one jan, as if the virus wasnt enough lol. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2020 10:19:00 AM

Yeah pure fiction - i was walking by the sea and heard someone sneeze and got the idea - I had to grab a pen and find a till receipt in my pocket to write it down lol. Hope you had a wonderful time in Wales it always rained when we used to go :-) hugs jan xx