Spooning

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It was about three degrees, wind chill minus 22, one AM. That's when I saw her, nestled in the jet black sky, curled in spooning posture.

Spooning New moon spooning - in the warmth of a cold and distant lover. John G. Lawless 1/17/2015

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:54:00 PM

John, CONGRATULATIONS, on your awesome 12 liner Ekphrasis WIN! :) SKAT

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 7:10:00 PM

This is brilliant John. Luna and her lover. I love it!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/8/2015 4:56:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/7/2015 9:20:00 PM

Congrats to you, John...I love your free verse...reads almost like a haiku...hugs, Rhonda

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/19/2015 9:29:00 AM

Seems a bit of a twister this one, mate. Your right about my not having been to see you much of late. My apologies, no excuses, just apologies.

John Lawless
Date: 2/7/2015 8:32:00 PM

No worries Scott, always good to hear from you.

Skat A

Date: 1/17/2015 10:34:00 PM

I don't mind this, very nice. Love ~SKAT~

John Lawless
Date: 2/7/2015 8:29:00 PM

Hey Skat, sorry to be so late in responding, new grand daughter, three feet of snow, sore back, work...the usual. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment, always appreciated.