Spooky

spooky spider legs waltz across a witch’s web ~ creepy crawlies cringe

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Valsa George

Date: 10/18/2023 10:39:00 PM

Real spooky ! This waltzing doesn't delight but sounds scary ! Great senryu dear Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/19/2023 6:36:00 AM

Hi sweet Valsa. She's just trying to survive, maybe. It is Halloween you know. LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2023 12:41:00 PM

love your use of sounds in this one.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/18/2023 12:45:00 PM

Thanks my friend. :)

Lin Lane

Date: 10/17/2023 3:55:00 PM

I think I'd rather see the witch get caught in the spider's web. lol Fun write, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/17/2023 4:06:00 PM

Hey Lin. LOL, well, she's not so bad. She's quite the showman...but sweet inside. :) Thanks for visiting and commenting! :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/17/2023 3:38:00 PM

Interesting read! Seems a calling forth by magic. Enjoyed read Senryu, take care lovely Flower and have a nice day~AA

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/17/2023 4:05:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I so enjoy your visits! your flower, Linda :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/17/2023 3:01:00 PM

eeegads! your imagery made me feel as if a spider was in my office with me...I loved 'waltzing across a witche's web.' Perfect, Linda! have a pleasant evening, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/17/2023 4:05:00 PM

A fine evening to you as well Sara. Thank you for waltzing through this senryu with me. I appreciate you. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2023 10:46:00 AM

ooh I love the imagery I can picture the spider waltzing across the web - am not a fan of spiders but i love the poem! hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/17/2023 10:57:00 AM

Hey Jan - glad you enjoyed this! I have a great picture from unsplash but cannot get it to load. Many thanks for dropping by! :)