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March .4.2024
Spontaneity Poetry Contest
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Even as a child, how I used to enjoy A simple stroll through the woods When innocent instincts ruled my heart And ran after every call from the wild or bush, Mesmerized by the warbling of the cuckoo and the thrush. It was a time when every rainbow and every peacock feather Ignited endless curiosity in me And colored my imagination wild. How with my friends, I ran to the beautiful seaside Watching the wild waves’ fury and cooled by the kiss of spray Feeling the sea foam and the sand under our bare feet With what delirious joy we watched at night A hundred fireflies dancing around Wondering if they were stars, fallen from heaven. Like the sweeping breeze, we ran over grassy slopes, Looking for the bleating lamb Singing in chorus, ‘Mary had a little lamb’ They were all spontaneous acts like breathing, With no interest in gaining anything or impressing anybody But just the simple signs of being alive, And a way of burning the exuberant energy that overwhelmed us. I was never called a poet or an artist then— Not worried about rehearsing or perfecting my art. I was just an observer, inhaling all the beauty With a fluid spontaneity, characteristic of childhood

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Date: 3/9/2024 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear.
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:55:00 PM
This is so sweet. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:55:00 PM
This is so sweet. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 3/7/2024 12:20:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, you have captured the essence of a child's spontaneous wonder of the world when they explore cracks in the sidewalks, wildflowers, follow the flight of a robin or try to put sunshine into a bottle! So well done, dear friend. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/7/2024 12:02:00 AM
This is so beautiful and I love the reminiscing about childhood! You may not have been called a poet then but I am certain in your spirit you always were! Congratulations on your high placement in the contest dear Valsa!
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Date: 3/7/2024 12:08:00 AM
Finally got my comment to post! Sorry for duplicate in soupmail!
Date: 3/4/2024 12:48:00 PM
Dear Valsa, The universe operates in mysterious ways, and I believe that when we let our innocent instincts guide us, we can embrace spontaneous moments without hesitation. Your poem captures the joy and freedom that comes with acting on impulse. It is not always easy to be spontaneous with age and experience, but it allows us to feel truly alive. Your honesty and eloquence in expressing these sentiments are truly refreshing.
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Date: 3/4/2024 10:37:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL SONG OF SPONTANEOUS JOYS IN CHILDHOOD. WELL PENNED.
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Date: 3/4/2024 6:14:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your way with expressing is refreshing, for the honesty that flows and the way your words are woven in such eloquence, truly blows me away everytime, and somehow resonates too with me, growing up and even now, i am an observer, observing little things in life, perhaps, a deep thinker and feeler too. And this title spontaneity goes with me , cause sometimes, i just let the wind take me where i should, universe works in mysterious ways… i believe. I love the ending the most. FAV! BOL
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:36:00 AM
"When innocent instincts rules the heart", we throw caution to the wind and enjoy those spontaneous moments, Wonderful write Valsa
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:01:00 AM
- Spontaneous acts make you feel freedom... a wonderful feeling, Valsa :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/4/2024 12:55:00 AM
very beautiful poem, and precious words, i guess, spontaneity, is not so easy with expericence, but we feel so alive, thanks for the wonderful poem
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