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Poetry/Rhyme/Spontaneity
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1626-043-26
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, February 26, 2024


For the International Contest, Spontaneity
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 03/06/2024

Fifth Place
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"Spontaneity is childlike wonder, it is simplicity, abandon and curiosity; but, it takes 'courage' to embrace the unexpected." Quote by _Constance
I like to write free, to just drift in whimsey and rhyme: just brave me, fancy free; writing on a whim where I shine ! My words twirl and dance, muse, and me in a childlike play: happenstance, we enhance; and like magic words float and sway ! Winging it in peace, I entwine in a trance serene: to release, what's beneath, often muse takes me to fields green ! Disregarding rule, in reckless abandon I write: call me fool, or jewel; free my words soar into the light !
"Discarding narrow thought flow crutch we learn directly by soft touch and what we garner we relay to the vast void in childlike play entwined thus with the universe we dance without need to rehearse"

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Date: 3/7/2024 3:51:00 PM
I like the free flow of your words. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/7/2024 10:53:00 AM
What fun, Constance, your words of childlike glee - twirling, dancing, playing. More like a jewel, I think! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of Lenten renewal to you!
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Date: 3/7/2024 11:00:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/6/2024 11:44:00 PM
I especially love these lines, “My words twirl and dance, muse, and me in a childlike play: happenstance, we enhance; and like magic words float and sway !” Indeed your words are magical and well written! Congratulations on your high placement in the contest!
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Date: 3/7/2024 11:01:00 AM
Karen, thank you for comment, compliment and congratulations, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/28/2024 5:17:00 AM
Words come automatically and spontaneously. This is what we experience as we read your poems. The spontaneous flow of words make your poems stand out. All the Best dear Constance!
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Date: 2/28/2024 11:18:00 AM
Valsa, thank you for the comment, and compliment, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/27/2024 11:04:00 AM
wow, you did his contest SO WELL. I bet it makes the winner list.
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Date: 2/28/2024 11:19:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment, well we never know the result till the contest is judged, but I hope he likes my poem too, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/27/2024 10:41:00 AM
EXCEPTIONAL POEM ON SPONTANEITY. A real dose of spontaneous muse. Nice one.
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Date: 2/28/2024 11:19:00 AM
Jay, thank you for the compliment and comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/26/2024 6:48:00 PM
The many years I've known you. You know the way it comes to us. By Muse.
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Date: 2/27/2024 7:18:00 AM
Situation, thank you for the comment, I think that I have more then one Muse depending on the type of poem I am writing, for example I know Snow (because I love snow) is my Muse for Winter poems, he is almost a lover, then there is Forest for nature poems, and death for sad poems, etc, etc, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/26/2024 4:45:00 PM
Outstanding write for the contest, dear Constance. I felt your creative free spirit take flight. I especially liked the last line. Well done!
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Date: 2/26/2024 6:25:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance
Date: 2/26/2024 4:43:00 PM
Dear Constance, Your poem is pure joy! It perfectly captures the essence of free-flowing creativity and the courage to embrace the unexpected. The playful language and whimsical rhymes truly embody the childlike wonder you describe. You beautifully express how embracing spontaneity allows your words to "twirl and dance" and your muse to take you to unexpected places. The free spirit of your poem resonates with the accompanying quote, and your closing lines, "entwined thus with the universe / we dance without need to rehearse," create a powerful image of connecting with something larger through unconstrained creativity. This is a delightful and inspiring piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/26/2024 6:26:00 PM
Daniel, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, and compliment, blessing, Constance
Date: 2/26/2024 11:31:00 AM
Hello Constance, yes it does take courage to embrace the unexpected. Love & Froiendship, /Darlene/
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Date: 2/27/2024 10:43:00 AM
Hello Constance, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 2/26/2024 3:41:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for the comment, hugs, Constance

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