Spoke To a Cloud

Spoke to a cloud today – 
the usual conversation
about shape and size, 

lows and highs...whether
my need to tote a handy, spring
loaded umbrella...or a better chance
to go without pants, dance
on the beach ~ showing off
thighs, widening sockets
of older generational eyes – he 
told me of clouds who gather and
threaten, causing ships to leap into
salty lather, sailors beware! 
take battened-down care! – schools
of fishes diving to ocean depths
they share, with ancient vessels (and sewage),
a seafloor covered with sandy
coinage – a diver's delight; when
stormed into sight – 

more subjects of our chatter
and debates, were those of tides
and tectonic plates; also of bony-splatter:
living shrapnel, from a well aimed cannon-ball 
against a wooden hull, or artillery shell, 
man's modern perpetuation, of that never
settling, always heartening seafarer's knell – 

I went on to ask, if in all his travels, had
he ever seen anything truly divine?
Like an angel passing...or a saucer
flying...perhaps some mythical dragon
soaring, trying to lasso down a tasty
moon ~ bring him brightly closer,
doing some dragon flips, salivating
for cheesie fondue lips....

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Date: 3/30/2022 2:12:00 AM
Perfection, almost. Beautiful, undoubtedly. Truthful, absolutely. I love u included our polluting, wR-mi fearing etc so beautifully. Just awesome Great Father Poet. Fave
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/30/2022 3:47:00 PM
Hi Anil; thank you. You made my day. Blessings!
Date: 3/28/2022 7:17:00 PM
I went on to ask, had he ever seen truly Devine, impressive, lovely. Well said Joe Dimino. Have a great day
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/29/2022 9:30:00 AM
Hi Arjun; unless one reasons a divine behind unexplained living manifestation, it can only be seen by one who has trained his/her spiritual eye. At least, that is what I have found ~ Thank you my friend. Blessings!
Date: 3/28/2022 9:58:00 AM
Great creative pen Prince! Unique, to be sure One-off your best! Wow! Pangie
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/28/2022 12:26:00 PM
Hi Pangie; Thank you. Have great day my friend!
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