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Spoilt Brat Footles

‘Princess’
in mess

Flicks hair -
Beware

Bad mood
Is rude

She whines
At times

She pouts
And shouts

Mummy … 
DUMMY!!!!!!!!!!

Stamps feet
Retreat!

Can clout –
Watch out!

Prissy 
Missy

Spoilt brat –
Hate that!

5th June 2015

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Joanna Daniel March 19, 2017 at 8:53 AM Nice one, Jan:) great example for your contest, never tried out these before, but you are an expert:) Jan Allison March 19, 2017 at 5:39 PM I'm no expert Jo i just love this form and have such fun with the humour and find them simple to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 7, 2015 at 8:10 PM Love the picture, love the footles, love your humor! All kids have their moments but some are worse than others...mine are angels all the time...LOL. Hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison June 8, 2015 at 1:43 AM Thanks for the comment Rhonda - do hope you will join in with the fun in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome June 6, 2015 at 2:49 AM Your majesty Footie Queen. I've seen many brats on my travels my younger sister was one. loved this. the picrure is so appropriate. well done best wishes. your knight in rusty armour. Sir Peter. a 7. Jan Allison June 6, 2015 at 2:52 AM Peter I hope you will think about entering the contest or at least penning a few footles for fun:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France June 6, 2015 at 1:37 AM Jan the queen of funny, back to read your awesomeness Jan Allison June 6, 2015 at 2:10 AM I have been called the 'queen of footles' and 'mistress of mirth' but as you know i have encountered a 'blockage' and it has lead to a run of crap poems lol - oh I hope I can always laugh at myself:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith June 5, 2015 at 10:30 PM my crown - bow down ....the footle queen Jan Allison June 6, 2015 at 2:07 AM I understand Tim life issues take precedent - there will be more contests to come in the future:-) Hugs jan xx Tim Smith June 5, 2015 at 10:41 PM hope it doesn't fill to quickly..wont be able to get to it until Monday night or Tuesday Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 10:36 PM Do you remember the fun we had collaborating on our footles poem Tim lol - I do hope you will join my new contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Thomas Martin June 5, 2015 at 10:29 PM ROFL, Jan. Sowell chosen rhymes! Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 10:35 PM I do hope you will join in my contest Thomas - I posted this to give people the idea of what I am looking for - this only took me 5 mins to write:-) So few words can say so much! :-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus June 5, 2015 at 4:52 PM Hi Jan...this is a great set of footles and a perfect picture to compliment it. You're good at these...you fell in love with footles straight away when you first wrote them several months back! Hugs // paul Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 5:32 PM I did fall in love with the form Paul - I guess that is why I find them so simple and fun to write - the humour aspect really appeals to me and so few words really can paint a big picture - hope you join in my contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France June 5, 2015 at 3:52 PM Jan, these footles do tell a story, a sad story of a mean spoilt brat the picture is great, a wonderful 7 and great inspiration for your footle contest Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 4:08 PM Glad you like it Broken wings - hope it inspires you to pen a few fun ones for the contest - the more you do the funnier it is and it really is a very simple and effective form:-) cant wait to see what you come up with:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight June 5, 2015 at 3:52 PM So cool, Jan! Love the way you did this! Hope I can get inspired for your contest! Hugs, 7, Sandra Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 4:10 PM I am sure you will do something brilliant Sandra - it really is a very simple yet effective form - this took me about 5 minutes to write at school yesterday and i have also written another about a teenage boy which I will post soon:-) Hugs jan xx

Jerry T Curtis June 5, 2015 at 3:20 PM This is what comes from real inspiration, when I fell the heat---the poem gets a 7 Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 3:41 PM Thanks Jerry:-) i do hope you will enter my footles contest:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance June 5, 2015 at 1:36 PM Oh yeah I can relate to every word! Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 1:51 PM lol refers to little onesas well as teenagers I guess lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick June 5, 2015 at 1:08 PM I feel for the person living with this teen with the attitude also for her future husband.Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 1:30 PM I wrote the poem when i was at school yesterday - i have lots of inspiration from people watching lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2015 at 12:32 PM .... Perfect ..... I have to laugh at your 'Princess' in mess :) - Happy weekend, Jan! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 12:40 PM I wrote this at school yesterday morning - have done another about wreckless boys! Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez June 5, 2015 at 8:51 AM The picture is perfect! It did justice to your footle! haha... Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 12:24 PM Thanks Kim - heads up footles contest will be coming - hope you participate:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman June 5, 2015 at 8:30 AM Oh yes you truly paint the pictures here..love these... Jan Allison June 5, 2015 at 12:24 PM Thanks Harry I had fun with this one - wrote it at school yesterday morning when i was sitting in an exam waiting for students to need my help with reading and no one did - wrote 3 poems and studies for my food safety course... and a poem came from that too :-) Hugs jan xx