Joyce Johnson Poet Lanterne

Spoilsport

Kids want to play.
Rainy day comes.
The grey denies.

Rains cats and dogs.
Even hogs pout,
but frogs rejoice.

Clouds roll away.
Sun will stay out.
Make way for fun.

Hurrah for sun,
in just one hour
all done with games.

                                                  Won no. 10

For Dr. Mehta's contest

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Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2011 at 12:11 PM congrats on your win. should have been higher!

Sara Kendrick August 12, 2011 at 5:22 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

David Williams August 12, 2011 at 3:33 AM hey Joyce, congrats on your win, David

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2011 at 10:54 PM JOyce, this is a great job. I am curious why you didn't name it the correct form? It's not lanterne. It's something like tha-bauk. Anyway, I found it very difficult to do and be witty at the same time. How ambitous of you to do four. I thought that was cute how you said the hogs pout!!

John Freeman August 11, 2011 at 10:36 PM Cool idea Joyce. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 11, 2011 at 7:48 PM Congrats Joyce on your sweet success with new form and great poetry my friend.. super duper one..

Robert A. Dufresne August 11, 2011 at 7:17 PM congratulations Joyce on your well deserved win. I enjoyed your poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2011 at 7:15 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Joyce. Love,Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 11, 2011 at 6:33 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Joyce

James Fraser August 11, 2011 at 1:37 PM The summer holidays here sure have had the Spoilsport weather. Nice short piece Joyce. Good luck in Dr. Rams contest :)

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2011 at 1:30 PM Good luck in the contest with this impressive work..Dr. Ram will surely like this one..Sara

Judy Ball August 11, 2011 at 1:12 PM Nicely done my friend. You linked it well together to form one thought. Loved the imagery here. Rainy days can be a drag but then the kids can go out and play in the puddles. They love that. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2011 at 2:13 AM cute, and you got alot in. I can't even come up with a single one that I like for this contest, Joyce!

Carolyn Devonshire August 8, 2011 at 2:07 PM I was smiling thinkking about the frogs rejoicing in the rain, Joyce. Back in the day, I used to color or draw for hours on rainy days. Love your use of the form and the upbeat ending! Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Cyndi Macmillan August 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM Joyce, this is great! Loved the playfulness of this one ---especially hogs pouting!!!Also liked the rhyme between lines 9 and 10 (Fun/Sun). Makes me want to try the challenge for a 5 or 6 stanza Than-Bauk with multi rhyme scheme. Hope you place high for this smile maker! Cyndi

Olusegun Arowolo August 8, 2011 at 12:22 AM Nice write up Joyce.I love the expression.more grease to your elbow.

Lee Ramage August 7, 2011 at 10:31 PM Well done, sounds easy to write, it is challenging. Well done. lee

Russell Sivey August 7, 2011 at 9:30 PM Very good!! I really liked the third verse, "Make way for fun", awesome!!

Jack Ross Jr. August 7, 2011 at 9:11 PM Excellent write great form...lovely Lady with love...old Jack

Robert A. Dufresne August 7, 2011 at 9:02 PM This poem of yours than-bauk style is excellent . I really appreciate your comment, Joyce. Once one does a couple of these they are kind of fun really. See you at the top and God bless : )