Deb Wilson Poet Limerick

Splendor On the Beach

Two lovers are walking the sand
Each gazing at their wedding band
Their deeply felt love
Sent  down from above
Has been touched by God's mighty hand

He peers into her lovely eyes
As slowly the sun starts to rise
The splendor of knowing
Their vast love is showing
Completes them,they do realize

She places her hand on his chest
And whispers that she loves him best
Her kisses are sweet
As his heart skips a beat
They both know their union is blessed



By Deb Wilson
for contest"Loveland Limerick"
sponsored by Linda -Marie--sweetheart of PS
inspired by picture #JT 76969

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Dr Hitendra Mehta April 12, 2011 at 4:54 AM Many congrats Deb on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Caryl Muzzey April 11, 2011 at 9:20 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman April 11, 2011 at 6:21 AM Wonderful rendering, Deb, i really like this. Harry

Black Eyed Susan April 11, 2011 at 5:16 AM Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 11, 2011 at 4:44 AM Congratulations on your win Deb in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson April 10, 2011 at 11:23 PM Very lovey entry and great win. I wonder how she chose among all these . Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan April 10, 2011 at 11:02 PM Such beautiful images, such romance. Many congrats.

Nette Onclaud April 10, 2011 at 7:59 PM my cheeks flush, deb! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2011 at 2:33 PM AHHH, yes, and love is a many splendored thing. Your poem reminds me of that movie with the two on the beach! congratulations.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2011 at 11:06 AM Congrats on this very sweet write for Linda's Contest Deb :) enjoyed this one :)

Gautami Phookan April 10, 2011 at 11:02 AM A lovely poem Deb, beautifully done.Congratulations on you win..Love,Gautami

Dr.Ram Mehta April 10, 2011 at 10:32 AM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Deb

Joe Maverick April 10, 2011 at 10:25 AM Good to be sharing the placement with such an accomplished contestant Deb, & congratulaions!

John Freeman April 10, 2011 at 10:17 AM Good to see your poem in the top 6, Deb, Congratulations on your honored 6th place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 10, 2011 at 8:00 AM Congrats Deb on your success in my contest with this lovely entry.. thankxx for your support always luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta March 15, 2011 at 6:09 PM Nice interpretation of the picture, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 15, 2011 at 5:30 PM thankxx for supporting my current contest Deb.. good luck luv.. reading fully as judging time draws closer .. as always ..amazing lines..