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Splendor

"Though nothing can bring back the hour Of splendor in the grass, of glory in the flower We will grieve not, but rather find Strength in what remains behind." Wordsworth ~ ~ Youth is wild and quick to tears Discovering firsts, and thirsts unknown And love can wound the urgent heart that is littered deep with countless fears. She lost her grip upon the oars to navigate the tender years. A climb too steep, a love too deep the depth would troll depression years The tears of anguish broke the grip of nineteen hundred, twenty six The pairing of such fragile bliss was broken in defeat There are a few who love too much ... They shatter in the glow We stood apart and watched it all We watched the paths of two who loved, still pondering now, of what might have been but learned to see how time can bend, and change the story's end ~ "Though nothing can bring back the hour Of splendor in the grass, of glory in the flower"
--------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Movie Mania-Romance" Contest Inspired by the movie "Splendor In The Grass" 1961 Starring Natalie Wood and Warren Beatty Sponsor: Nicola Byrne 9/16/16

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Date: 10/6/2016 5:57:00 AM
Congratuations on your win Carrie...
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Date: 10/5/2016 12:49:00 AM
Carrie, you have decorated the poem with such beauty and power. Wonderful phrases and descriptions. I just love it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/4/2016 11:03:00 PM
Beautiful write, Carrie. I did see this film years ago -- I'll have to refresh my memory with a re-watch! Congrats. :-)
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Date: 9/17/2016 3:26:00 AM
You don't need a seven from me, nor a prediction for placement....you have got my attention though...I would love to be a fly on the wall. To watch you write , watch your eyes light up when the words fit and the last full stop is placed....this is a Cheshire grin write, when You the writer knows it worked and put every ounce into it...well done Carrie.....a fan...Ian
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Date: 9/16/2016 10:55:00 PM
Carrie, this is beautiful! I was so impacted by that movie I have watched dozens of times. I loved the poem of Wordsworth's that added such depth and beauty to the film, and also to your poem. You chose really well and I think your creation will get top honors. : ) 7
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