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Brandee Augustus

Splash of the Falls

mossy wet rocks
pelted with clear, crisp water
loud rushing liquid

Copyright © Brandee Augustus | Year Posted 2009

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October 18, 2009 at 9:40 PM

You have painted a marvelous picture of the falls with your words my friend,I thank you for sharing the read and for your most welcomed comments concering my poem. God Bless, always, Adell

October 12, 2009 at 5:52 PM

Beautiful, lovely refreshing Haiku, the picture you paint with your graceful so vivid. Sincerely, Moses

October 11, 2009 at 6:20 PM

Lovely and refreshing, your imagery is voivid in this wonderful Haiku! Best of luck in Rauls' contest! Love, Robin

October 11, 2009 at 4:25 PM

Beautiful picture with this wonderfully penned Haiku, Brandee. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

James Marshall Goff

October 9, 2009 at 7:13 PM

image-filled beauty! Brandee!, good luck in Raul's contest!, and thanks for congrats!... jim

October 8, 2009 at 9:41 AM

I loved reading your Haiku...nice. Good luck on the contest....Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 8, 2009 at 5:52 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Brandee should you enter. This is an awesome piece. Love, Carol

October 7, 2009 at 11:15 PM

Lovely piece, Brandee! Best of luck in the contest. (You are entering Raul's latest, right?) Hugs, Donna

October 7, 2009 at 4:38 PM

Good use of multi-sense images to convey your thoughts. The title is fitting for the poem. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

October 7, 2009 at 4:08 PM

Brandee, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

October 7, 2009 at 1:48 PM

Wonderful Haiku Brandee >> James

October 7, 2009 at 1:33 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

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