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Splash of the Falls

mossy wet rocks pelted with clear, crisp water loud rushing liquid

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Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 9:40:00 PM

You have painted a marvelous picture of the falls with your words my friend,I thank you for sharing the read and for your most welcomed comments concering my poem. God Bless, always, Adell

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 5:52:00 PM

Beautiful, lovely refreshing Haiku, the picture you paint with your graceful so vivid. Sincerely, Moses

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/11/2009 6:20:00 PM

Lovely and refreshing, your imagery is voivid in this wonderful Haiku! Best of luck in Rauls' contest! Love, Robin

Elaine George

Date: 10/11/2009 4:25:00 PM

Beautiful picture with this wonderfully penned Haiku, Brandee. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/9/2009 7:13:00 PM

image-filled beauty! Brandee!, good luck in Raul's contest!, and thanks for congrats!... jim

Marty Owens

Date: 10/8/2009 9:41:00 AM

I loved reading your Haiku...nice. Good luck on the contest....Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2009 5:52:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Brandee should you enter. This is an awesome piece. Love, Carol

Donna Golden

Date: 10/7/2009 11:15:00 PM

Lovely piece, Brandee! Best of luck in the contest. (You are entering Raul's latest, right?) Hugs, Donna

Date: 10/7/2009 4:38:00 PM

Good use of multi-sense images to convey your thoughts. The title is fitting for the poem. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/7/2009 4:08:00 PM

Brandee, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 10/7/2009 1:48:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Brandee >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2009 1:33:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara