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Splash of Inspiration

many fearless nights, I prowled on rooms of grimy paper dimmed then lit by this lone wayfarer searching a gush of passion to feed the words with some fire, rawness, and hunger... perhaps my barren soul tarried on to pay for dues upon a bleeding ink's return; and now that this antique pen wants to let you relish my verses, chew them and swallow fluid visions like a dash of wine, I feel they are mute: my own instinct likes phrasings that haunt the senses... but as twilight whisks, these hands fake a churning from the bile...I have everything to lose, except the rush of images splashing my face with inspiration. Kai Michael Neumann's Splash Contest 6/4/2020
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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Hello Nette Onclaud, a dep lovely read. I enjoyed every word. Enjoy your day my friend.
Mishra Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 8:35 AM
This is so beautiful Nette! An instant fave for me. I love the flow of your words with such depth. Congratulations on your win :)
Agustin Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 5:14 AM
Wow! Congrats! Verily an intellectual splash made vivid by your poetic elucidation. God bless you.
Leffanta Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 1:53 PM
I do recall the days of bleeding pens so well recaptured by you! Aloha! Rico
Cunningham Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Quite a dark poe like verse Nette. You master words beautifully. Tom
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