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                         Reflections Of Time Pic(kl)ed & Bottled | Purvi's Purple Petals

many fearless nights, I prowled on rooms of grimy paper dimmed then lit by this lone wayfarer searching a gush of passion to feed the words with some fire, rawness, and hunger... perhaps my barren soul tarried on to pay for dues upon a bleeding ink's return; and now that this antique pen wants to let you relish my verses, chew them and swallow fluid visions like a dash of wine, I feel they are mute: my own instinct likes phrasings that haunt the senses... but as twilight whisks, these hands fake a churning from the bile...I have everything to lose, except the rush of images splashing my face with inspiration. Kai Michael Neumann's Splash Contest 6/4/2020

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:58:00 PM
Hello Nette Onclaud, a dep lovely read. I enjoyed every word. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/8/2020 8:35:00 AM
This is so beautiful Nette! An instant fave for me. I love the flow of your words with such depth. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/8/2020 5:14:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Verily an intellectual splash made vivid by your poetic elucidation. God bless you.
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Date: 6/4/2020 1:53:00 PM
I do recall the days of bleeding pens so well recaptured by you! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/4/2020 8:55:00 AM
Quite a dark poe like verse Nette. You master words beautifully. Tom
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