Splash-Less Beyond Trees

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*Image of Tolumne River by Giphy. Splash-less Beyond Trees A river seeps forming a bend, exposed to some serene calmness, ere fumbling amidst a succession of boulders, petting them for a harmonious score, whilst the breath of dangling vapor, straddles o'er it throughout its caresses of trees, approaching both fronts ..., the melodious tunes, correspond to the two contemporaneous fixtures ..., nature, being its beneficial component. 2020 March 01 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND 1097 ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 27

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 9:27:00 PM

Great scene depicted. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/27/2022 10:28:00 PM

'Twas a simple write, Christuraj, my deepest thanks my friend, Aloha~William