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Spiritual Highlight

The doubter's eye yelled, "show me, god." Go for stroll in quiet cloud laud. Look where he might track down calmness. Who can see black bug fold their nod? Who sees our veins in the darkness. And wowed the bloodstream in process, And views embryo's feed in the womb, Though hears and sees what is voiceless, Love is clearly starting to bloom. And knows what he claims in the gloom, On the vast seas, warm ships of chance, Wind, blowing past your flower's tomb. Rising one's rate of mindfulness. Looking backward to your justness. We've been imbued with a pulse feast. Bringing the soul's grace to brightness Bliss, wholeness In a calm exist. Keep god's still voice in the spirit. Grace strike when our ego is shorn. Praise, the soul's promise, mends the beast.
Rubaiyat Form, HMS check Written: January 22, 2022 Show Me God Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buehler Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 11:41 AM
This is a really impressive contest entry, Lasaad. Lovely images. Best of wishes, Evelyn
Trifiatis Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 9:37 AM
How can one show God when as St John says in his Epistle that no one has seen Him? God can be perceived only through His creation, as you so wisely insinuate! An inspiring work! God bless you, dearest Lasaad!
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 8:48 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page inspired mw. Sara
George Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 6:15 AM
All together it was a divine experience reading this beautiful poem . It appealed to me from start to finish. The concluding two lines are an icing on the cake. A great entry for the contest Lasaad !
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January 23, 2022 at 1:30 AM
This is a difficult contest. God is so immense and we a mere grain of sand cannot understand Him properly.
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