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Spiritual Awakening

Like buds open soft, Mind blooms with no serenade. But it's pure fragrance, Reaches distant akin hearts. The symphony tolling long... Third Place in STRAND no 750,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Constance La France

Date: 5/13/2020 7:02:00 PM

Jenish, wonderful, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 10:58:00 PM

Thank you Constance...

David Mchattie

Date: 4/25/2020 1:04:00 PM

Not my favorite poetry style but this one touched me. Well penned my friend. Stay safe.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/26/2020 11:38:00 PM

Thank you David for your kind words..Takecare always..

Eve Roper

Date: 4/24/2020 11:43:00 AM

Wow, I like this, Jenish, so deep with spiritual feeling. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/25/2020 12:28:00 AM

Thank you Eve.. Stay safe..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2020 6:59:00 PM

very nice, Jenish and Caren does like short poems. Yikes. I gave her a long one. I have no idea what my fate shall be!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/24/2020 2:36:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..long or short doesn't matter if won hearts..I'm sure you did a winner..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/23/2020 3:14:00 PM

When our soul yearns for its spiritual source the mind unlocks the gates of reason letting thus pure light pass through bringing with it enlightenment. Mystic writing dearest Jenish. Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/24/2020 2:33:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for that valuable comment..Takecare..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/23/2020 7:03:00 AM

Excellent poetry, Jenish--reaching out with spiritual awakening.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/23/2020 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Vijay for the delightful comment..Takecare..

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 4/23/2020 3:31:00 AM

The thousand petaled Sahasrara softly and silently unfurls its many colours. x

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/23/2020 4:05:00 PM

far far more fascinating that crown ....it's such a rabbit hole and one with tunnels and passages worth exploring further...regards, Curiosity Did Not Kill this Cat.xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/23/2020 4:05:00 AM

wow..Sahasrara.. Its a Sanskrit word.. The symbol of spiritual awakening.. Great..