Jenish Somadas Poet Tanka

Spiritual Awakening

Like buds open soft,
Mind blooms with no serenade.
But it's pure fragrance,
Reaches distant akin hearts.
The symphony tolling long...


Third Place in STRAND no 750,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Constance La France May 13, 2020 at 7:02 PM Jenish, wonderful, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 10:58 PM Thank you Constance...

David Mchattie April 25, 2020 at 1:04 PM Not my favorite poetry style but this one touched me. Well penned my friend. Stay safe. Jenish Somadas April 26, 2020 at 11:38 PM Thank you David for your kind words..Takecare always..

Eve Roper April 24, 2020 at 11:43 AM Wow, I like this, Jenish, so deep with spiritual feeling. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas April 25, 2020 at 12:28 AM Thank you Eve.. Stay safe..

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2020 at 6:59 PM very nice, Jenish and Caren does like short poems. Yikes. I gave her a long one. I have no idea what my fate shall be! Jenish Somadas April 24, 2020 at 2:36 AM Thank you Andrea..long or short doesn't matter if won hearts..I'm sure you did a winner..

Demetrios Trifiatis April 23, 2020 at 3:14 PM When our soul yearns for its spiritual source the mind unlocks the gates of reason letting thus pure light pass through bringing with it enlightenment. Mystic writing dearest Jenish. Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas April 24, 2020 at 2:33 AM Thank you Demetrios for that valuable comment..Takecare..

Vijay Pandit April 23, 2020 at 7:03 AM Excellent poetry, Jenish--reaching out with spiritual awakening. Jenish Somadas April 23, 2020 at 9:14 AM Thank you Vijay for the delightful comment..Takecare..

Lady Labyrinth April 23, 2020 at 3:31 AM The thousand petaled Sahasrara softly and silently unfurls its many colours. x Lady Labyrinth April 23, 2020 at 4:05 PM far far more fascinating that crown ....it's such a rabbit hole and one with tunnels and passages worth exploring further...regards, Curiosity Did Not Kill this Cat.xx Jenish Somadas April 23, 2020 at 4:05 AM wow..Sahasrara.. Its a Sanskrit word.. The symbol of spiritual awakening.. Great..