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Spiritual Awakening

Like buds open soft,
Mind blooms with no serenade.
But it's pure fragrance,
Reaches distant akin hearts.
The symphony tolling long...


Third Place in STRAND no 750,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Constance La France Date: 5/13/2020 7:02:00 PM Jenish, wonderful, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/13/2020 10:58:00 PM Thank you Constance...

David Mchattie Date: 4/25/2020 1:04:00 PM Not my favorite poetry style but this one touched me. Well penned my friend. Stay safe. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 4/26/2020 11:38:00 PM Thank you David for your kind words..Takecare always..

Eve Roper Date: 4/24/2020 11:43:00 AM Wow, I like this, Jenish, so deep with spiritual feeling. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 4/25/2020 12:28:00 AM Thank you Eve.. Stay safe..

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/23/2020 6:59:00 PM very nice, Jenish and Caren does like short poems. Yikes. I gave her a long one. I have no idea what my fate shall be! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 4/24/2020 2:36:00 AM Thank you Andrea..long or short doesn't matter if won hearts..I'm sure you did a winner..

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/23/2020 3:14:00 PM When our soul yearns for its spiritual source the mind unlocks the gates of reason letting thus pure light pass through bringing with it enlightenment. Mystic writing dearest Jenish. Hugs xxx Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 4/24/2020 2:33:00 AM Thank you Demetrios for that valuable comment..Takecare..

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/23/2020 7:03:00 AM Excellent poetry, Jenish--reaching out with spiritual awakening. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 4/23/2020 9:14:00 AM Thank you Vijay for the delightful comment..Takecare..

Lady Labyrinth Date: 4/23/2020 3:31:00 AM The thousand petaled Sahasrara softly and silently unfurls its many colours. x Login to Reply Lady Labyrinth Date: 4/23/2020 4:05:00 PM far far more fascinating that crown ....it's such a rabbit hole and one with tunnels and passages worth exploring further...regards, Curiosity Did Not Kill this Cat.xx Jenish Somadas Date: 4/23/2020 4:05:00 AM wow..Sahasrara.. Its a Sanskrit word.. The symbol of spiritual awakening.. Great..