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Spirit Touch

Touch my flowing spirit, if you can. It dances on highest treetops, So that very few ever can. It sits laughing atop the lotus tree! Waiting for you to go close your book. Life does not live there, don't you see? It's in my elusive laughter. And my own poetic pedigree! September 5, 2019

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Date: 9/9/2019 3:58:00 AM
"Lo!, if I could just catch a branch instead of top the Lotus tree to be rendered remote in reshaping and catch the breath from God lips to embrace the winds and see the horizons embracing me while alone God breathed life in me once again I hold on my top of the lotus tree as my spirit covers all of the leaves" was led to join in on the tree climb hope you don't mind a FAV for me .. write on James
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/9/2019 11:27:00 AM
Good Monday Morning from the West Coast. What a beautiful statement about the lotus tree! Thank you! Grateful that you FAVVE'D this also. Please do write on. More poets should read your most inspiring works. Love, Panagiota
Date: 9/6/2019 5:35:00 PM
It is perfectly fineto see it anyway you choose. You read it and left a gift. A comment. I think a soul acknowledging another soul is quite spiritual.!)) Appreciate your gift. Love, Panagiota
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Date: 9/6/2019 3:34:00 PM
- I would describe it as a wonderful experience of freedom, Panagiota ... the opportunity to see your own spirituality (poetic) - But, maybe I'm wrong :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2019 5:39:00 PM
Anne-Lise. My turn for error. My response is in box above. Sorry. PR
Date: 9/6/2019 8:22:00 AM
Very charming indeed. Happy writing and many blessings for you I pray.
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Date: 9/6/2019 11:11:00 AM
Why thank you! I wish you the same! Panagiota
Date: 9/5/2019 10:43:00 PM
I can see you up there, and almost watch you gliding in the wind later.
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Date: 9/6/2019 11:10:00 AM
You are so right. Love, Panagiota
Date: 9/5/2019 7:37:00 PM
This is charming, Panagiota. I can just picture your elusive spirit laughing atop the lotus tree. Wonderful imagery. ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/5/2019 7:47:00 PM
Aw thanks,Gershon, Indeed, nice here atop the tree! Loving and laughing. Panagiota

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