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Spirit of Swan Lake

" In titanium haze of love, truth is but a mere lie, never unlocking gold vaults of feelings, for, honesty weeps somewhere in perfumed odes of inkless pages, hidden in our forlorn fate..." If twilight roses were reincarnated angels, they would carve a zillion destinies with feathered letters, flickering beneath butterfly glitters, adhering glossy wings of rosemary, like a balm to invisible scars and encasing my soul in a hundred hues of blood. But, I never knew, the secrets of nebulous-cloaked vengeance which infused in nightingale's forevermore fortunes, echoing eerie whispers in elora moors of scarlet jasmines, at the jinx of midnight's omen; for thou emerged as a lover in ninety-nine novels, but a guised killer in the farewell fantasy. As I float by, in the swan lake, losing myself to thee, I wish upon defrosting your eyes, that got submerged beneath icebergs of betraying harbinger and bleed my soul in frosted heart's snow-sealed milky ways, as these flaked clayey leaf pamphlets of sakura scents aren't enough to erase thy fingerprints from this poisoned chalice, that sung sinful serenades in deadly paradise of Eurydice and sliced my spirit to sooty shreds, in this diamond dungeon behind sage valleys. Laced in ash grey lies, I'm a corpse enveloped in crimson croons of confetti, whilst lips soak acrylic dewdrops of melting roses, that once blanketed our eden in the arms of heaven, with starlit petals. So, as Nymph, in the orisons, with hemlock fused heart, be all my sins remembered. For, love is a smoke raised with the fume of sighs, demising to sacrificed meadows, where, this kismet tale departs in the very ecstacy of cradling mist, and thus, with disoriented twilight's kiss, I die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/16/2024 9:37:00 AM
Ah angelic star, congratulations on your top win in brians contest, well deserved. Always love seeing you in winners list
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Date: 10/16/2023 12:39:00 PM
One of the best poems dear...Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 10/15/2023 9:54:00 AM
Hiya, this is a masterpiece and an instant fave! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 10/6/2023 9:58:00 PM
Hiya, I am always moved to wonder and reverence seeing the plethora of images and great metaphors you use in each of your poem. Your lines have choked my throat and moistened my eyes. What a poignant tale of kismet you have narrated, telling how sorrow has crept into your eden once blanketed in rose petals and safe in the arms of heaven.... now slicing your soul to sooty shreds.'Twilight, grey, corpse, sooty'... every word suggesting death and decay. Love can possibly take such unexpected twists. Very very emotive and moving!
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Date: 10/6/2023 10:22:00 AM
Wow. You're an amazing poetess.
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Date: 10/6/2023 10:11:00 AM
Such a poem filled with emotions though you tread in dark alleys where finally your soul will die. Great imagery and originality. Blessings.
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Date: 10/6/2023 5:34:00 AM
Wow you have used such dramatically touched lines, I was truly awe-struck. But I must say your concluding lines really brought it all home. A fave for me dear Hiya. Hugs
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Date: 10/5/2023 2:35:00 PM
Hiya--your poem has such outstanding lines and imagery. You painted beautiful, emotional pictures with your words. I'm in awe of your talent. The title is perfect for the overall theme. I loved the line "rosemary balm for invisible scars."Those words resonated with me. Well done, dear Hiya! have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 10/5/2023 12:34:00 PM
A most emotive story in your poem, especially the ending... so much imagery and amazing lines here... You choice of words here are very good and the metaphors very creative.. Feathered letters, butterfly glitters are great word pairing and so many great lines of description... secrets of nebulous-cloaked vengeance which infused in nightingale's forevermore fortune and Laced in ash grey lies, I'm a corpse enveloped in crimson crooned confetti are some of the amazing lines..
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:55:00 AM
Dear Hiya, I am utterly awe-struck by the sheer depth and power of your lines and verses. Each word you pen is like a brushstroke on a canvas, creating a masterpiece of emotions. Your talent is unparalleled, and I find myself captivated by your artistry. Your ability to transform feelings into vibrant colors, tangible textures, and thought-provoking metaphors is truly remarkable. It is clear this is your calling, as you have delicately and gracefully intertwined a tapestry of vulnerable emotion
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Date: 10/5/2023 9:41:00 AM
"For, love is a smoke raised with the fume of sighs, demising to sacrificed meadows, where, this kismet tale departs in the very ecstasy of cradling mist," -- very beautiful, poetic writing. "Do not eat thine own heart" -- we must die to old, that the new may rise in triumph. Lovely, sensitive profound read. Thank you.
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Date: 10/5/2023 9:21:00 AM
Emotions in colors, textures, metaphors. Definitely your niche. This one is rather sad though. Betrayal is always treacherous, heartbreaking. Especially when dealt by our dearest love or friend
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Date: 10/5/2023 9:20:00 AM
as these flaked clayey leaf pamphlets of sakura scents aren't enough to erase thy fingerprints from this poisoned chalice, that sung sinful serenades in deadly paradise ---For, love is a smoke raised with the fume of sighs, demising to sacrificed meadows---you had me glued to this discourse of ebb and flow of love and relationships. Splendid write as always, Hiya.
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Date: 10/5/2023 7:32:00 AM
Beautiful gift you have in captivating the mind in true elegance: )
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Date: 10/5/2023 6:43:00 AM
Relationships and love can be sometimes a smoke raised with the fume of sighs, demising to sacrificed meadows. Pls dont die tho, amidst the kismet tale that departs! Where do i start praising your words? The metaphors alliterations and imagery and depth of your words truly are so captivating and left me utterly in awe mesmerized. Disorientation never sounded or read as beautifully as this! You truly paint emotions with words in sheer eloquence, and i admire that, and how your words now flow too
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