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Spirit In the Sky

. patchwork clouds of gold calm waters reflect Heaven coastal rocks watching

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/27/2010 9:58:00 PM

this is such a comforting haiku, Mitch :) --I especially loved your first line, and together with the other 2 lines, it really paints a wonderful picture :) thank you as well for your comments :)

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/21/2010 5:39:00 PM

i love the title. and what a wondeful poem. yes, i can the see the amazing imagery of that golden spirit soaring through the sky. -always

Marty Owens

Date: 4/27/2010 9:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Enjoyed..very nice...Marty

Kim M

Date: 4/27/2010 9:06:00 PM

Hello, my friend! I noticed this poem was listed in the top 100 poems of the past two weeks (along with several others of yours). Yeah! I like this description of the clouds as "patchwork clouds".

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 9:01:00 AM

Congrats, Bro! Thanks for your comments!..Very nice Haiku!...Jimmy

John Beam

Date: 4/26/2010 4:56:00 PM

thanks congrats on win hope you have more

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/26/2010 11:49:00 AM

very nice congrats on your win faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2010 4:28:00 AM

Great write in this one...I see from someone's write that you won...So congratulations....It is amazing the perspectives that different ones have on these...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my writes..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2010 10:32:00 PM

Hey, I see you placed with it too. I wanted to include the rocks myself. You got it in well. Congratulations, Mitch. LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/25/2010 10:02:00 PM

Congrat.,..a well deserved win..awesome,I love the patchwork clouds of gold.....Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 7:38:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your 1st place win in Raul's contest with this superb write for the photo Vanilla Sky... awesome victory my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/25/2010 7:10:00 PM

very good Mitch, I'm glad you won with it. Charles

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/25/2010 5:33:00 PM

Nice work...#1 !!! Hooray for you Mitch!! Wishing you a vanilla sky evening!! ~ Carrie

Kim M

Date: 4/25/2010 4:24:00 PM

Great one! Congrats!

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/25/2010 4:13:00 PM

Mitch, congratulations on winning my contest...Raul

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/25/2010 3:19:00 PM

Awesome! Mitch. Well written Haiku. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2010 2:21:00 PM

excellent write sounds interesting to me, enjoyed,..p.d.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/25/2010 12:12:00 PM

very nice if for contest good luck hope you are having a great weekend faleshia

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/25/2010 8:55:00 AM

l Great entry in the contest. Good luck. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/25/2010 8:49:00 AM

Well expressed thoughts.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 8:17:00 AM

This is quite nice Mitch and describes perfectly the view of the photo.. good luck int he contest which just closed this second... my entry is Radiant Feast... happy Sunday to u..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/25/2010 7:43:00 AM

absoulty beautiful picture could see this on a canvass painting and hung up great entry for contest gl and thanks for your kind comment

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/25/2010 6:40:00 AM

Wow... Makes me want to rewrite mine.. very good my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2010 3:17:00 AM

Great descripitve write in this one...Should do well in the contest..Good luck..Sara

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/25/2010 2:54:00 AM

Nice Haiku short, sweet, and very descriptive. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit