Mitch White Poet Haiku

Spirit In the Sky

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                                         patchwork clouds of gold

                                       calm waters reflect Heaven

                                          coastal rocks watching

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 27, 2010 at 9:58 PM this is such a comforting haiku, Mitch :) --I especially loved your first line, and together with the other 2 lines, it really paints a wonderful picture :) thank you as well for your comments :)

Lynette Chachere May 21, 2010 at 5:39 PM i love the title. and what a wondeful poem. yes, i can the see the amazing imagery of that golden spirit soaring through the sky. -always

Marty Owens April 27, 2010 at 9:21 PM Congratulations on your win...Enjoyed..very nice...Marty

Kim M April 27, 2010 at 9:06 PM Hello, my friend! I noticed this poem was listed in the top 100 poems of the past two weeks (along with several others of yours). Yeah! I like this description of the clouds as "patchwork clouds".

Jimmy Anderson April 27, 2010 at 9:01 AM Congrats, Bro! Thanks for your comments!..Very nice Haiku!...Jimmy

John Beam April 26, 2010 at 4:56 PM thanks congrats on win hope you have more

Faleshia Murphy April 26, 2010 at 11:49 AM very nice congrats on your win faleshia

Sara Kendrick April 26, 2010 at 4:28 AM Great write in this one...I see from someone's write that you won...So congratulations....It is amazing the perspectives that different ones have on these...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my writes..Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2010 at 10:32 PM Hey, I see you placed with it too. I wanted to include the rocks myself. You got it in well. Congratulations, Mitch. LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop April 25, 2010 at 10:02 PM Congrat.,..a well deserved win..awesome,I love the patchwork clouds of gold.....Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 25, 2010 at 7:38 PM Congrats Mitch on your 1st place win in Raul's contest with this superb write for the photo Vanilla Sky... awesome victory my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Charles Henderson April 25, 2010 at 7:10 PM very good Mitch, I'm glad you won with it. Charles

Carrie Richards April 25, 2010 at 5:33 PM Nice work...#1 !!! Hooray for you Mitch!! Wishing you a vanilla sky evening!! ~ Carrie

Kim M April 25, 2010 at 4:24 PM Great one! Congrats!

Raul Moreno April 25, 2010 at 4:13 PM Mitch, congratulations on winning my contest...Raul

Caroline Cécile Delacroix April 25, 2010 at 3:19 PM Awesome! Mitch. Well written Haiku. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2010 at 2:21 PM excellent write sounds interesting to me, enjoyed,..p.d.

Faleshia Murphy April 25, 2010 at 12:12 PM very nice if for contest good luck hope you are having a great weekend faleshia

Joyce Johnson April 25, 2010 at 8:55 AM l Great entry in the contest. Good luck. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta April 25, 2010 at 8:49 AM Well expressed thoughts.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 25, 2010 at 8:17 AM This is quite nice Mitch and describes perfectly the view of the photo.. good luck int he contest which just closed this second... my entry is Radiant Feast... happy Sunday to u..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Katherine Stella April 25, 2010 at 7:43 AM absoulty beautiful picture could see this on a canvass painting and hung up great entry for contest gl and thanks for your kind comment

Michael J. Falotico April 25, 2010 at 6:40 AM Wow... Makes me want to rewrite mine.. very good my friend

Sara Kendrick April 25, 2010 at 3:17 AM Great descripitve write in this one...Should do well in the contest..Good luck..Sara

Anthony Nutter April 25, 2010 at 2:54 AM Nice Haiku short, sweet, and very descriptive. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit