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Spirit Delirium - Ice

I am the mind disturbed that thinks it’s well euphoria surfs, dysphoric swells perfect storm before the cresting wave felled the confidence of the brave I am the liar that catfished hope Stole from a random heart that couldn’t cope Love leaps, faith jumps, joy follows Suicide upon the maddened rocks below I am all the tears that fell Abide in the hidden depths of sorrows well I am the fire that burns up all your dreams Dying light of fallen stars and moonbeams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/6/2021 7:13:00 PM
Well done, Georgia ~ glad to find this lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 12/12/2022 12:04:00 AM
Thank you…..I was absolutely delighted…..I’ve been away drinking up life ….changes….I must write again
Date: 5/23/2020 1:37:00 PM
i love the sentient nature of your beat...great writing Georgia...
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 5/26/2020 6:12:00 PM
thanks Gibbs, truly sad seeing the impact of methamphetamines
Date: 5/22/2020 9:39:00 AM
Hi George : You have a fine way of expressing yourself nin poetry, Bravo!
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 5/26/2020 6:08:00 PM
Hi Ralph, thank you for reading and comment
Date: 7/6/2019 5:36:00 AM
This went straight to my FAV list for my soul and my muse LOVED it so!
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/13/2019 1:58:00 AM
Caren, I am honoured
Date: 7/4/2019 11:47:00 AM
Nicely done, the mind, the liar and the tears. J'aime.
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 3:53:00 AM
Thank you Kurt, your response is insightful, I never viewed the poem so neatly divided and it will help me organise my thoughts for future work.
Date: 7/3/2019 10:45:00 AM
I really enjoyed your word choices... and as a former addict I understand where this is coming from.
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 3:51:00 AM
thank you for your response and always wonderful to hear of good news of recovery. I'm working (pathetically) on my sugar addiction.
Date: 6/18/2019 9:00:00 AM
Georgia, a very thought-provoking poem, especially the second stanza. Excellent use of imagery. ~Mark
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 3:56:00 AM
Mark thank you so much for your encouragement.

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