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Spirit Delirium - ICE

I am the mind disturbed that thinks it’s well
euphoria surfs, dysphoric swells
perfect storm before the cresting wave
felled the confidence of the brave

I am the liar that catfished hope
Stole from a random heart that couldn’t cope
Love leaps, faith jumps, joy follows
Suicide upon the maddened rocks below

I am all the tears that fell
Abide in the hidden depths of sorrows well
I am the fire that burns up all your dreams
Dying light of fallen stars and moonbeams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/6/2019 5:36:00 AM
This went straight to my FAV list for my soul and my muse LOVED it so!
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/13/2019 1:58:00 AM
Caren, I am honoured
Date: 7/4/2019 11:47:00 AM
Nicely done, the mind, the liar and the tears. J'aime.
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 3:53:00 AM
Thank you Kurt, your response is insightful, I never viewed the poem so neatly divided and it will help me organise my thoughts for future work.
Date: 7/3/2019 10:45:00 AM
I really enjoyed your word choices... and as a former addict I understand where this is coming from.
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 3:51:00 AM
thank you for your response and always wonderful to hear of good news of recovery. I'm working (pathetically) on my sugar addiction.
Date: 6/18/2019 9:00:00 AM
Georgia, a very thought-provoking poem, especially the second stanza. Excellent use of imagery. ~Mark
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 3:56:00 AM
Mark thank you so much for your encouragement.