Spirit Brightness Rising

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Spirit light gleams upward the same as a sunbeam, Limbs lifted in praise as dark succumbs to light, The splendid burden of glazed sheets, as we resume, Dissolving bitterness induces serenity and blight. Limbs lifted in praise as dark succumbs to light, Swap you up in lovely ecstasy and glorious bliss, Dissolving bitterness induces serenity and blight, Stage of life's grip on the concept is a weakness. Swap you up in lovely ecstasy and glorious bliss, No spot survives, and all-outer turmoils expire, Stage of life's grip on the concept is a weakness, Everyone in this wood is thrilled around the fire. No spot survives, and all-outer turmoils expire, We adore the moral realm and board a vast void, Everyone in this wood is thrilled around the fire, An impressive narcissist with a heavenly enjoyed. We adore the moral realm and live in a vast void, The splendid burden of glazed sheets, as we resume, An impressive narcissist with a heavenly enjoyed, Spirit light gleams upward the same as a sunbeam. Written: May 24, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/29/2022 9:08:00 PM

When we become aware of the bliss of the soul state, all burdens fall away like dead scales. The joy is so bright, the blinding light diminishes all material concerns and dispels all of the illusion. Mindful Pantoum full of wisdom, Lasaad. Thank you for sharing your wisdom though your poetry with us.