spires of faith hiku





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                       sacred towers rise,          ^
                                                            / \
                                                           /   \
                                                          /     \
                                                          l  /\  l
                                                          l  ^  l
                                                          l      l
                                                        _l  / \ l_ hope's light in the city's heart,
                                                     _l  /  /\ \ l_
                                      l                /   /    \ \              l 
                                     ^             /  /   /\   \ \            ^
                                  l/ ^ \l        /  /   /     \   \ \      l/ ^ \l 
                                  l/    \l      /   /  /   /\   \   \  \   l/     \l
                                  l   ll  l_  l    l   l    l_l    l   l   l_ l   ll   l
                                  l       l   l    l   l    l_l    l   l   l   l       l
                                  l       l   l    l   l_____ l    l   l   l       l
                           ___ l   ll   l   l    l   l    ll ll   l   l   l   l   ll   l___
                                  l       l   l_  l_ l_  ll ll_  l_ l_ l   l        l
                                                   __________
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                                           ----------------------------
                                       heaven's peace descends.
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Date: 7/25/2025 4:47:00 PM
oh, wow!That's amazing...not just the words but the image you so patiently created. What talent! have a blessed evening, Sara
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Date: 7/17/2025 5:35:00 PM
You are so good at these. A difficult task, and you made it look easy.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/17/2025 8:32:00 PM
Thanks, dear poet. A difficult task indeed yet I enjoyed doing it. Love~BFA
Date: 7/17/2025 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Exceptional work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/17/2025 3:03:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. I am humbled by your encouraging words.
Date: 7/16/2025 8:59:00 PM
This is art! lovely congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/16/2025 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, dear Thriveni. You soothe my soul. Love~BFA
Date: 7/16/2025 10:31:00 AM
This is maybe the best I've seen. Big congrats on your win
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/16/2025 1:52:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Rea. Your kind words touch my heart. Love~BFA
Date: 7/16/2025 10:28:00 AM
Astonishing creation & beautiful words. Can’t wait for your next shape, Bernard.!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/16/2025 1:56:00 PM
Much thanks. You have ignited the fire of my pen. Love~BFA
Date: 7/16/2025 9:51:00 AM
This is gorgeous!!! Sooo creative and awe inspiring! Xo
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/16/2025 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Crys. Actually, you have inspired me. Love~BFA
Date: 7/16/2025 7:04:00 AM
Impressive!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/16/2025 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Ma'am Trina. Love~BFA
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