Spindle, Hourglass, and a Doll

A young woman Sleeps Dreams of a spindle Possibly a magic spindle So she may spin Some special threads To create a lovely sweater For winter is upon her And her hourglass says Time is about up Her dream will end And she will awaken And that darn doll of hers Will be between her arms And her body Watching for the dream keepers The doll doesn’t like How they keep her asleep And not playing with her The hourglass says The spindle is gone now… Replaced by a lollipop And a donkey However she wishes to dream Will be her prerogative The dreams ends And she awakens To find her doll Smiling at her Eerily… She wonders if her dream… Na there’s no truth in them It’s just a dream Nothing more With that she gets out of bed And gets ready for her day When she walks into the kitchen What did she see A spindle on the counter With a note “Use the hourglass To return to dream Then maybe your dreams Will come true” With that she left to go to work
Russell Sivey Entrant into Jeremy Martin's "Objectify me" contest 2/15/2013

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Date: 3/18/2013 12:48:00 AM
This is an outstanding piece my dear friend Russell! I extremely enjoyed reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing and my hearty congratulations for your awesome win! Thank you so much for the wonderful & inspiring comments on my poems my dear friend. I'm sorry, I came late because I was so busy. Happy St. Patrick's Day and God bless you always! love & hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:01:00 AM
Congrats Russell. Donna
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Date: 3/16/2013 12:38:00 PM
RUSSELL, this is a nice winning poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) always~ PD
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:42:00 PM
A very neat poem and also inventive. I really enjoyed it and congratulations! -Jeremy
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Date: 3/15/2013 2:45:00 PM
Russell, lovely form about the cold of winter and leaving behind your youth, congratulations.
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:48:00 PM
So happy to see this on the winners list !!! Congratulations !! Mine made the list too !! woo hoo lol
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Date: 3/15/2013 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your marvelous poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/19/2013 8:42:00 PM
Love where you took these words...excellent story poem. Reads like a winner to me !! I need one of those hourglasses to return to a dream...
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Date: 2/15/2013 8:43:00 PM
Hello Russell, stopping by to read one more before I log out... a good entry for the contest... always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:47:00 PM
Mesmerizing.......loved it
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Date: 2/15/2013 2:29:00 PM
Great job Russell. I haven't come up with any ideas for this contest. My mind cannot conceive twisted or dark. Good luck. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/15/2013 8:41:00 AM
Very tale tell that you have woven in this work..Reads like a winning work to me..Enjoyed being caught in a story this morn..Thanks for stopping by my heart shape poem..We have been together over 52 1/2 years and married 50..There are ups and downs but love can overcome all..Sara
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