Spin of Time

The season is here
On this typical Maiden morn
 Of week days
It’s by this hour
Though slightly late
I rose to take my bath

The ointment was done and gone 
What’s more was to
Nestle on the well placed
Soft sofa by the corner
Of my reading room
And to await my breakfast
To be served.

Well has been done to the belly
What’s needed (from me) was 
After settling on the round
To dress up and find my way
To the lecture room

Alas an indignation
Though a natural inclination
That crept into the scene
When I was about stepping 
Out of the room

Here I picked up the cast 
Of the rolling sound
Escorted by the heavy gale
 At the fore
Of my chamber door 

The cloud I glimpsed
Beckoned on these 
Natural commotions
 
The rumbled 
Of this morn thunderstorm
Took me by surprise
As I felt the tremble of my abode 
As though the roof and the wall would cave in

How heavy this morning rush would be?
Certainly it’s heavy and took charge closely 
Three hours of the entire day

Blessing showery hours
Wasn’t it?
That would best be related
In the meantime
By the soaking swamp
The well wet weed
The saturated sea pool
And the colorful field 
Of bloom cherries and roses

Posted on 23/04/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/1/2013 9:58:00 PM
this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations o. Your outstanding win. Well deserved. Connie
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:48:00 PM
Hello my friend Abdulhafeez , CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun in closing my contest... "A weeks into my poem.... contest." Take care and enjoy my blog if you want... have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA
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Date: 6/26/2013 3:46:00 PM
congrats on a well deserved win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:03:00 AM
You Inspire...:):):)Loved t....Adarsh
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Date: 6/24/2013 5:36:00 PM
An exquisite piece! Your language is unique and unforgettable. I especially like your final five lines. Brilliant, Abdulhafeez!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/24/2013 3:52:00 PM
I felt I was visiting a strange land! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2013 7:56:00 AM
A wonderful write AO. Loved the imagery in it, flowed well. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:39:00 AM
nicely penned AO.....I like the end result of cherry and rose blooms...thanks for stopping by
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:36:00 AM
This piece reminds me of my frien Yanny's work which I am very fond of. Very intresting use of language and imagery.
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