Spider-Man Blanket Pov: a Poem

When will you need me again?
I know I am your security when you're in faraway lands,
But when will you go out again?

When will you notice me here?
Laying on the floor, under the bed.
I hear your footsteps every morning and every night.
But when will I see you again?

When will you realize you're me?
Ignored, forgotten, missed, claimed to be deeply loved.
I know you did not put me in this place.
And I know you did not put yourself in your place.
But when will you see we are the same and deserve better?

(08/05/22)

Emotion: Despair

Strong Emotions Poetry Contest (9th Place)
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 9:14 PM
This is excellent Jasmine. So happy to see it on the winner’s list. Congratulations. Blessings xxoo
Miller Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 5:37 AM
A wonderful poem, Jasmine congratulations.
Trombone Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 4:06 PM
Thank you so much Terry!!
Fowler Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Love this Jasmine. Congratulations on your win! Linda
Trombone Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 4:05 PM
Thank you, Linda! That means a lot!
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations Jasmine! Your poem "Spider-Man Blanket", earned you a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 100 poems entered but your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of this accomplishment, this was a hard contest to judge, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
Trombone Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, Emile! It means a lot that it caught the eye of someone so esteemed. Thank you again!
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