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Black Widow

black widow webbing intricate labyrinthine deceptive deathtrap AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on April 2, 2018

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/3/2018 3:23:00 AM

Nice one. It mind sound weird, but your Haiku speaks about balance, I think. Many poetic wishes, Kai

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:55:00 AM

You have the true heart of a poet, Kai. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/2/2018 8:50:00 PM

Nicely done, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:54:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/2/2018 5:19:00 PM

Yeeeeeeeesss! You have 'captured' its allure perfectly. Excellent! :) Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

John Lawless

Date: 4/2/2018 10:55:00 AM

Vivid description of a death trap.....and the intricacy of its timeless construction

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 11:40:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, John.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/2/2018 9:39:00 AM

Ooh nice one!!! :) xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 11:40:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/2/2018 9:26:00 AM

I want to steal this idea for a personification poem; and I will try not to use any of your words, yet how can this be? They are so completely accurate. Great haiku, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 11:41:00 AM

Go for it, Caren. I look forward to reading your creation.

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/2/2018 8:18:00 AM

Nice Haiku ... The clever turn is nice ...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:37:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Probir. Much appreciated.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/2/2018 7:57:00 AM

Love this one, Line. Elegantly crafted !!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mike. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/2/2018 7:24:00 AM

They are fascinating Line, especially in autumn when they really stand out when covered in moisture. And certainly deceptive, have seen many a fly meet his maker. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:44:00 AM

Yes, Tom. But so much art goes into their lovely trap. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/2/2018 7:21:00 AM

fabulous description Line and I love that last line!:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jan, for your lovely visit and comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/2/2018 7:11:00 AM

Good description Line. Well done :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you fro your lovely visit and comment, Heidi.