"sphinx - Dom"

Your Highness, the Triads of the Milky Way galaxy “Planet Earth”
Have evidence of Your “GRAND” - Grand - Father’s”  ‘“ E T E R N I T Y “ ‘
As Your Shrine Shines in the heat of a desolate “Forbidden Dessert of Life”
Crumbled , broken, eroding “ The Shrine of Your Beloved “ FOREFATHERS “
I as YOUR Servant :  as the Knowledge , YOU bestowed upon my “Foreheads’ “

The  Triads have advanced  ; their technology today equals Yours of “ History “
How long before they realize ;  the  devastation they avoid  : they also “Created”
Shall they  think they have found  the “ Forever answer “ to Eternal, Everlasting “
How do YOU tell them that the Dreams they  Dared to Dream, were not “Reality”
Know that they can see the “T R U TH“, in Death, not the DEATH of Your “TRUTH”

The third Planet from the Sun ;  we call the “ Raven Star “  unraveling it’s destiny
As they did to the  Lineage of YOUR  “GRAND - Grand - Father’s” “ANCESTRY”
Will they SURVIVE?, Will they See, Know, Speak and PRAY TO their “GOD”
Do they learn to LOVE one another, to Help each other?  To keep History “ALIVE?”

“So VERY SAD to say ; My Friend , they do not Find  the Key to EVERLASTING LIFE”  

Author's Note : This POEM was Inspired by Two of My Favorite POETESSES
Carol Brown ( My MENTOR ) for Her Contest "STORY TIME " I dedicate this to YOU
Carolyn Devonshire ( My TEACHER ) for Her Contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?
Dedicated  with LOVE to my POETESS LAUREATE "CAROLYN DEVONSHIRE"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/14/2010 7:08:00 PM
Hi, Daniel~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 9/18/2010 10:51:00 PM
This is royal language, HG, their royalties should be delighted with this dedication. I am sure it will hold its own in the contest and in their hearts.
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:54:00 PM
Very awesome write, best of luck in the contest, by the way, that co-write I did with Deborah, was so time consuming, did you see the form Sestina, those are killers, we did everything back and forth, back and forth, but we finally got it done.. thanks for your comments on it~~
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Date: 9/16/2010 4:33:00 AM
Interesting write...If this is for that contest, good luck..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2010 10:36:00 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest as well as for the dedication, HG. Carol Brown is one of my favorite people too! Love, Carolyn
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