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I found echoes of a testimony written in the dark, Buried in a wooden box, Made from Noah’s ark. It started with an apology for the damage that they’d done, It said they took too much, And had tried to steal the sun. There was nothing else within the box, But for a little knot of hair, And a yearning of lost sorrow, that gently filled the air. I closed the lid, And laid the box, For another to come and find, Because something deep within me, Said this wasn’t for mankind.

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Date: 10/1/2024 1:30:00 PM
What a poignant and heartfelt poem this is, so well written and expressed! I love the way youv especially written “ It started with an apology for the damage that they’d done, It said they took too much, And had tried to steal the sun.“!l so very deep! And the ending is brilliant! Soulful! Pleasure reading this touching poem. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/1/2024 2:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your words. I definitely felt this was one of my favourites pieces over the 30+ years I’ve been writing ! Glad you liked it x

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