Spellbound

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Succumbing to the night's allure, I greet the Goddess of the moon. And Luna rises, all aglow, elegant lady of the night. Dusk blurs the lines of light and dark, succumbing to the night's allure. And a sinking scarlet sun slips slowly over the horizon. Crimson chars the edge of the Earth; as shifting shadows swiftly merge. Succumbing to the night's allure; an owl announces dusk's approach. A diamond-studded ebony descends like a velvet curtain. And I am instantly spellbound, succumbing to the night's allure.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/10/2022 12:11:00 PM

Hello Emile, I do think that a sunset over the water is so beautiful. If I were by the water I would be there for hours watching the sunset. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2022 5:34:00 AM

Hello Emile, Yes i would be by the water watching the sunset for hours. Then the next day I would go back to the water and create poetry Blessings my friend. Enjoy your day. You are welcome my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2022 12:32:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene; your comments never fail to bring a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/10/2022 11:05:00 AM

Emile, you have left me spellbound after reading your marvelous quatern. Your imagery is so vivid, it is almost like an ekphrasis on the picture. Superb writing, my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2022 12:30:00 PM

Thanks, Milt; your comments have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.