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Spellbind Winter

Snow's mysteries withheld in a caress cloud sky— For only she knows her swirling mimes fear melt; Mercury rigid, cold— night child feels no breath; Surely there's still magic outside; me. For only she knows her swirling mimes fear melt— Flakes anchor in the phantasm's dust; blush. Surely there's still magic outside; me, While gloom is shone on past maiden rifts. Flakes anchor in the phantasm's dust; blush. Mercury rigid, cold— night child feels no breath; While gloom is shone on past maiden rifts— Snow's mysteries withheld in a caress cloud sky.

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Date: 1/27/2024 2:55:00 PM
You know when a form of poetry just feels like a warm blanket... it just lends itself to free flowing thoughts. Your magical super power is seeing right through to the best of the base of what you want others to feel :) It is beautiful and a Fav of mine!! A.S.
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Date: 1/9/2024 2:56:00 PM
Dreamlike! I don’t understand everything but it has nice imagery :)
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:16:00 PM
Nicely done dear Paige.. Great arrangement of words, nice flow also..
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:50:00 PM
Ah you do these pantoums just effortlessly dear sweet paige. I love the wintry theme and how picturesque it is and how your lines flow so seamlessly is beyond impeccable! You must be getting alot of snow there? Makes me wonder. Stay warm dear, il send you some sun. Pleasure always reading you. This definitely is a fave for me
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Paige Hind
Date: 1/7/2024 7:59:00 PM
Hey, it was supposed to snow- and didn't. I had already started a poem about snow and was going to finish it today, but ah well... I just wrote it a little differently. Lots of light <3
Date: 1/7/2024 6:05:00 PM
Paige, your poem exhibits exquisite craftsmanship, with its stunning imagery and impeccable composition.
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Date: 1/7/2024 4:52:00 PM
ahh...just lovely. The first line grabbed my attention and the rest of your poem didn't disappoint. I especially liked: Flakes anchor in the phantasm's dust; blush. Surely there's still magic outside. Have a great week ahead, hugs, Sara
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