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Scintillating snowflakes floating gently to the ground Painting the landscape white, they don’t make a sound Every single shimmering snowflake has a unique design Catch them on your gloves and hands, they look so divine Transforming our world to a winter wonderland Aesthetically pleasing, our gardens look so grand Children build huge snowmen; they have so much fun Until the snow begins to melt beneath the winter sun Lovely soft snowflakes swirling are a glorious sight All around us our surroundings turn a wintry white Real beauty captivates our eyes in our wonderful world Contest: Spectacular acrostic Sponsor: John Hamilton 16th January 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 11:48:00 PM

You are welcome, thanks for always replying to my comemnts. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 1:40:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 1/30/2016 6:08:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Faye Gibson

Date: 1/24/2016 4:31:00 PM

This is delightful, Jan; much of the US is buried in deep snow this weekend. Glad I am in sunny south Florida. Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 4:38:00 PM

I've seen the news reports Faye I would hate to have to deal with those conditions:-( hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/23/2016 7:46:00 PM

Beautifully penned! Congrats on your well deserved placement, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/22/2016 1:39:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2016 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/22/2016 12:36:00 AM

Well done, Jan, I promise not to burst into 'Let it go' from the animated film 'Frozen'. Hope you're all white. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2016 8:17:00 AM

I'm all white Mr Viv no snow here... yet and I must be the only person in the world not to have seen frozen lol:-) hugs jan xx

White Sage

Date: 1/21/2016 3:55:00 PM

congrats with your placement Jan...excellent piece this is

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2016 5:41:00 PM

Thanks White sage:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/21/2016 2:48:00 PM

Spectacular piece vividly reflecting the wonder and mystique of beautiful snow! Congratulations, Jan, on a wonderful win! Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2016 5:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 1/21/2016 2:13:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan. congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2016 5:42:00 PM

Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:46:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2016 5:42:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/20/2016 1:44:00 PM

This is spectacular and capturing , well expressed my dear , hugs / / :) dalia

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2016 5:43:00 PM

Thanks Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/19/2016 12:34:00 PM

I saw beautiful, pure white snow echoing laughter and I loved it ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2016 5:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Caycay:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 1/19/2016 8:34:00 AM

Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2016 5:41:00 PM

Thanks Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/16/2016 8:54:00 PM

A brilliant acrostic on that white carpet known as snow. As you probably know by now Mary and i do Love the snow so i was drawn in by the name of your piece. I was not disappointed in the write at all, it is an excellently, well thought out piece of poetry. The poetry is still singing Jan. Hugs....Vladislav. XX. Has to be a seven Jan and a fave.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/17/2016 1:05:00 PM

Thanks as ever Mike:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/16/2016 6:33:00 PM

A Spectacular acrostic! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 6:36:00 PM

aww thank you Arthur you are so kind with your encouraging comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2016 12:44:00 PM

ohh, this makes winter a wonderland, jan... spectacular write!..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 12:47:00 PM

Thanks Nette - we had a brief flurry of snow so I was inspired:-) hugs Jan xx

Viviane Leite

Date: 1/16/2016 8:43:00 AM

Nice pictures you've drawn here. Cheers!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thanks Viviane:-) hugs Jan xx

Archana Garg

Date: 1/16/2016 6:21:00 AM

Very well penned Acrostic ..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 6:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Archana:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage

Date: 1/16/2016 5:50:00 AM

well written Jan...excellent write, best of luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 6:33:00 AM

Thanks White Sage:-) hugs Jan xx

Theresa Cw

Date: 1/15/2016 11:30:00 PM

Great and spectacular poem you have written here dear Jan. Always a real pleasure to read your beauty of written poetry.... Hugs great lady from // Theresa

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 3:04:00 AM

THanks so much Theresa lovely to see you back:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/15/2016 6:32:00 PM

Snow is truly a spectacular sight especially for us from the tropics. Wonderful imagery here, Jan! hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2016 6:38:00 PM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2016 6:10:00 PM

you chose a great topic, Jan. I am really having to think on this one!! It will have to be either nature or something manmade, some big event or something. how is it going today?

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2016 6:14:00 PM

All fine with me - I found it hard to find a topic - then the weather helped me we had a short flurry nothing mega lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2016 6:00:00 PM

Very lovely Jan...best wishes

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2016 6:08:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/15/2016 5:26:00 PM

Very beautifully done. You are very talented.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2016 5:29:00 PM

Thanks for the kind comment Daniel:-) I have learned so so much since I joined the site in Feb 2014:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 1/15/2016 4:05:00 PM

I love snow as long as it doesn't hang around to long. Great acrostic Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2016 4:07:00 PM

I love it on Christmas cards Tim - it's so exciting when you are little but as you get older you realise what devastation it can cause:-) hugs jan xx