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I come here to find my place in the world By the clear water of the brook Where I’m captured as I take a look At gurgling falls and leaves floating uncurled I come here to find my place in the world At the shoreline of a pristine lake Where memories are made at daybreak As if light and time is unfurled There are places like this that motivate my soul Where wildlife take notice As I have an aura of ultimate bliss Glowing like a shiny apple in a bowl There are places like this that motivate my soul Reflections are rippling in my sight Like a painting moving in the sunlight Where revelations are born that make me whole 4/14/22 Entry for A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/20/2022 8:21:00 PM
Beautiful description here Heidi. I could see you walking through the glade by the crystal water. Nicely done. God Bless, JB
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/21/2022 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Judy. I hope you are having a nice day :)
Date: 4/20/2022 7:44:00 PM
Fortunate are you, with special places like this, Heidi. Light and Illumination, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2022 7:52:00 PM
I am grateful Gershon. I am grateful for your kind comments too. Thank you. Goodnight :)
Date: 4/18/2022 11:06:00 AM
Good luck in the contest Heidi, I like what motivates your soul, mine is also captured by your intense imagery! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/18/2022 5:18:00 PM
Hi Jennifer. Thank you for the kind feedback. Hugs and Blessings :)
Date: 4/15/2022 11:59:00 AM
Even computers need time to file data in the right place. Enjoyed!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/15/2022 12:18:00 PM
True Rico. Thank you ! I am happy you enjoyed this :)
Date: 4/14/2022 3:19:00 PM
You paint a very tranquil place with your words Heidi, best of luck in the contest and hope you have a very happy Easter weekend. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I appreciate your kind comment and support. I hope you have a nice Easter :)
Date: 4/14/2022 1:48:00 PM
I like the rhythms of your repeating lines, Heidi. Much enjoyed the tone that describes a special place to be. A delightful portrait. A FAVE for me.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 1:57:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your kind comment and the fave! I hope you have a nice evening :)

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