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Hours before tolls rang of Christmas midnight My godchild quite young, cuddled me real tight, Above, he pointed at the biggest star Then named it after me, brilliant from afar. My heart sang with his boyish thoughtfulness Amidst revelry, cheers started to progress Tidings and food graced the house and pine tree; Opening gifts on eve of jubilee. Beside my loot stood a wobbly paper bag With drawings my fingers had to untag Surprised, I murmurmed my holiday wish; Inside was a handmade star on creped varnish. Teary-eyed, a note of love written down Across a pad trimmed with bows all around; His precious gift made breaths rise, to exhale Oh, from a child who couldn’t rightly spell! Contest: Deb Wilson's The Perfect Christmas Gift Poet: nette onclaud

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Date: 12/30/2013 2:41:00 PM
So true I still have the spool my son put green glitter on at 5! It's on a piece of green curly ribbon. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/28/2013 3:58:00 PM
This is my personal favorite so far Nette. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2013 10:34:00 AM
I love how you wrote this poem. It is a very nice win. Congrats....Roger
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Date: 12/28/2013 7:11:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem on the Christmas Gift and congrats on the fine win, nette
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Date: 12/21/2013 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful! Love comes from the heart and from the hand. Gifts like that are more precious than gold.
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Date: 12/17/2013 8:04:00 PM
Aren't they just the best!!!!!..made with love..like macaroni necklaces! Have you ever gotten one of these? A beaut!
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Date: 12/17/2013 2:52:00 PM
heartmelting piece on christmas day...this is awe, Nette :)) ...every scene in each lines is felt!...a happy moment you made ^_^
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Date: 12/17/2013 2:21:00 PM
Ahhh!! What a wonderful gift and a poem to express the event..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/17/2013 11:40:00 AM
Speechless you have left me. You delicately bring out the child within from your magical hat.A treasure from a gifted poet!
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Date: 12/17/2013 9:09:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful!!!!! Again!! It's like...like...you know what you're doing as a poet. :)
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Date: 12/17/2013 8:41:00 AM
Nice take on the Christmas gift, nette and thanks for my placement in your contest,
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Date: 12/17/2013 8:31:00 AM
Nette glad to read your work again, this is an excellent write and should do well in the contest….David
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Date: 12/17/2013 7:37:00 AM
- As from reality ..... touching and beautiful - Luck in contest !!! Have a nice Tuesday, my dear friend Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/17/2013 7:20:00 AM
Awwww that is the sweetest poem I've read in a long time my friend! This is such a wonderful write Nette! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! How awesome, you are his star! What a lovely piece you have written, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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