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Special Ops

Special Ops! My heart needs a tourniquet For all the holes you burned in it... So the bleeding stops! You'll rue the day for this offense And suffer without recompense... My job's Special Ops! deborah burch© 5/01/2012

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/18/2012 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 1:49:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/15/2012 6:22:00 PM

LOL yes! the form lent itself to humour! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/15/2012 6:40:00 PM

*curtsey* ....lol thank you soooo much ;) I am enamoured! lol...big hugs, love ya deb

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/15/2012 4:59:00 AM

charming your way to the top, deborah..congrats on your win!..:) huggs

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/15/2012 8:23:00 AM

*blush* :) thank you dear Nette...love ya

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/14/2012 11:05:00 PM

WOW..Deborah you have done it again. This is a masterpiece, Congratulations.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/14/2012 11:04:00 PM

WOW..Deborah you have done it again. This is a masterpiece, Congratulations.

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 11:30:00 PM

*blush* thank you Elliott :) You are so kind...your encouragement means so much...big hugs, love deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2012 8:31:00 PM

I think I remember this COOL tail-rhyme. Big congrats, Deborah.

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 11:28:00 PM

lol...thank you Andrea!! :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/14/2012 6:13:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win, Deb. Awesome. Nice going. Thanks for your comment. hugs, Ralph

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 7:54:00 PM

:) thank you Ralph!! you are always so very welcome! big hugs, love ya deb

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 5/14/2012 5:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome piece,Deb...Ride on Lady...XOXO.....

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 5/14/2012 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome piece,Deb...Ride on Lady...XOXO.....

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 7:53:00 PM

:) thank you so very much Olusequn!! lol...big hugs, love ya , deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2012 3:43:00 PM

Great winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 7:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara...hope things are improving ...you are still in my prayers hun, love ya, deb

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/14/2012 2:43:00 PM

Great tail-rhyme poem....like the message !! lol....sick em!! lol.... Congrats on your winning place !!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 7:51:00 PM

:) thank you Debra! very much ...big hugs, love ya , deb

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/14/2012 2:02:00 PM

Great job, Deb....go get 'em !!! Congratulations on your win! ps....love your Avatar picture!!! beautiful !!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 2:19:00 PM

lol...thank you Carrie! :) *blush* ahhh, thanks...I'm really picture shy and don't allow pics of me but I opted for one for the soup! this was taken Saturday... big hugss...love ya deb

Kash Poet

Date: 5/14/2012 11:21:00 AM

Very good Tail Rhyme here Deb.Congrats on your big win!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 11:48:00 AM

thank you Kashi :)

David Williams

Date: 5/14/2012 11:20:00 AM

cap'n Deb huge congrats on your win..David

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 11:48:00 AM

:) thank you David...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/14/2012 10:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win Debs xx

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 11:47:00 AM

thank you ~GG~ :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/14/2012 10:06:00 AM

Nobody should mess with a poetess like you...Terry

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 10:23:00 AM

lol...ahhh you are too kind Terry...huggsss, love ya...deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/6/2012 2:49:00 PM

Deb, you need to give me the inside scoop in case I need "special ops" lol enjoyed this loads tonight ;) love Wilma

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/2/2012 5:59:00 PM

sweet revenge!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/2/2012 5:16:00 PM

Girl, remind me not to Tee you off! Nifty write. Like the dark twist. Sure to get some well deserved high marks. Hugs, Cyndi

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/2/2012 10:07:00 AM

this is different, Deborah, and a pleasure to read. harry

David Williams

Date: 5/2/2012 2:04:00 AM

Oohh Captain in special ops now he he he...David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2012 11:39:00 PM

hey this is a very interesting one. unique topic, Deborah! Good luck in Susan's contest.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/1/2012 6:30:00 PM

So cute and funny! And a very subtle use of end rhyme! Light & Love

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/1/2012 9:22:00 PM

:) thank you so much Debbie! I savor all your encouragements...big hugs, love debby

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/1/2012 5:16:00 PM

Nice, sweet write my friend! I rather thought your poem to be stupendous and uniquely lovely! I love your write tons! The line I enjoyed the most is, "For all the holes your burned in it" a prime example of an experienced poet! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/1/2012 9:19:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Russell! It does my heart good to always read your comments of encouragement...Thank you...you've been missed here on the soup :) big hugs,love deb