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Special Ops

Special Ops!


My heart needs a tourniquet
     For all the holes you burned in it...
          So the bleeding stops!

You'll rue the day for this offense
     And suffer without recompense...
          My job's Special Ops!


deborah burch©
5/01/2012

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Joann Grisetti

May 18, 2012 at 11:32 AM

Congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 17, 2012 at 1:49 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

May 15, 2012 at 6:22 PM

LOL yes! the form lent itself to humour! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Deborah Burch

May 15, 2012 at 6:40 PM

*curtsey* ....lol thank you soooo much ;) I am enamoured! lol...big hugs, love ya deb

Nette Onclaud

May 15, 2012 at 4:59 AM

charming your way to the top, deborah..congrats on your win!..:) huggs

Deborah Burch

May 15, 2012 at 8:23 AM

*blush* :) thank you dear Nette...love ya

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

May 14, 2012 at 11:05 PM

WOW..Deborah you have done it again. This is a masterpiece, Congratulations.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

May 14, 2012 at 11:04 PM

WOW..Deborah you have done it again. This is a masterpiece, Congratulations.

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 11:30 PM

*blush* thank you Elliott :) You are so kind...your encouragement means so much...big hugs, love deb

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2012 at 8:31 PM

I think I remember this COOL tail-rhyme. Big congrats, Deborah.

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 11:28 PM

lol...thank you Andrea!! :)

Ralph Taylor

May 14, 2012 at 6:13 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win, Deb. Awesome. Nice going. Thanks for your comment. hugs, Ralph

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 7:54 PM

:) thank you Ralph!! you are always so very welcome! big hugs, love ya deb

Olusegun Arowolo

May 14, 2012 at 5:30 PM

Congratulations on your awesome piece,Deb...Ride on Lady...XOXO.....

Olusegun Arowolo

May 14, 2012 at 5:29 PM

Congratulations on your awesome piece,Deb...Ride on Lady...XOXO.....

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 7:53 PM

:) thank you so very much Olusequn!! lol...big hugs, love ya , deb

Sara Kendrick

May 14, 2012 at 3:43 PM

Great winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 7:52 PM

Thank you so much Sara...hope things are improving ...you are still in my prayers hun, love ya, deb

Debra Squyres

May 14, 2012 at 2:43 PM

Great tail-rhyme poem....like the message !! lol....sick em!! lol.... Congrats on your winning place !!!

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 7:51 PM

:) thank you Debra! very much ...big hugs, love ya , deb

Carrie Richards

May 14, 2012 at 2:02 PM

Great job, Deb....go get 'em !!! Congratulations on your win! ps....love your Avatar picture!!! beautiful !!

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 2:19 PM

lol...thank you Carrie! :) *blush* ahhh, thanks...I'm really picture shy and don't allow pics of me but I opted for one for the soup! this was taken Saturday... big hugss...love ya deb

Kash Poet

May 14, 2012 at 11:21 AM

Very good Tail Rhyme here Deb.Congrats on your big win!

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 11:48 AM

thank you Kashi :)

David Williams

May 14, 2012 at 11:20 AM

cap'n Deb huge congrats on your win..David

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 11:48 AM

:) thank you David...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

May 14, 2012 at 10:43 AM

Congrats on your win Debs xx

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 11:47 AM

thank you ~GG~ :)

Terry O'Leary

May 14, 2012 at 10:06 AM

Nobody should mess with a poetess like you...Terry

Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 10:23 AM

lol...ahhh you are too kind Terry...huggsss, love ya...deb

Wilma Neels

May 6, 2012 at 2:49 PM

Deb, you need to give me the inside scoop in case I need "special ops" lol enjoyed this loads tonight ;) love Wilma

John Loving Iii

May 2, 2012 at 5:59 PM

sweet revenge!

Cyndi Macmillan

May 2, 2012 at 5:16 PM

Girl, remind me not to Tee you off! Nifty write. Like the dark twist. Sure to get some well deserved high marks. Hugs, Cyndi

Harry Horsman

May 2, 2012 at 10:07 AM

this is different, Deborah, and a pleasure to read. harry

David Williams

May 2, 2012 at 2:04 AM

Oohh Captain in special ops now he he he...David

Andrea Dietrich

May 1, 2012 at 11:39 PM

hey this is a very interesting one. unique topic, Deborah! Good luck in Susan's contest.

Debbie Guzzi

May 1, 2012 at 6:30 PM

So cute and funny! And a very subtle use of end rhyme! Light & Love

Deborah Burch

May 1, 2012 at 9:22 PM

:) thank you so much Debbie! I savor all your encouragements...big hugs, love debby

Russell Sivey

May 1, 2012 at 5:16 PM

Nice, sweet write my friend! I rather thought your poem to be stupendous and uniquely lovely! I love your write tons! The line I enjoyed the most is, "For all the holes your burned in it" a prime example of an experienced poet! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!!

Deborah Burch

May 1, 2012 at 9:19 PM

Thank you so much dear Russell! It does my heart good to always read your comments of encouragement...Thank you...you've been missed here on the soup :) big hugs,love deb

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