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Special Ops

Special Ops!


My heart needs a tourniquet
     For all the holes you burned in it...
          So the bleeding stops!

You'll rue the day for this offense
     And suffer without recompense...
          My job's Special Ops!


deborah burch©
5/01/2012

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Joann Grisetti Date: 5/18/2012 11:32:00 AM Congratulations. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/17/2012 1:49:00 PM A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Deborah. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/15/2012 6:22:00 PM LOL yes! the form lent itself to humour! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/15/2012 6:40:00 PM *curtsey* ....lol thank you soooo much ;) I am enamoured! lol...big hugs, love ya deb

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/15/2012 4:59:00 AM charming your way to the top, deborah..congrats on your win!..:) huggs Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/15/2012 8:23:00 AM *blush* :) thank you dear Nette...love ya

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 5/14/2012 11:05:00 PM WOW..Deborah you have done it again. This is a masterpiece, Congratulations. Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 5/14/2012 11:04:00 PM WOW..Deborah you have done it again. This is a masterpiece, Congratulations. Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 11:30:00 PM *blush* thank you Elliott :) You are so kind...your encouragement means so much...big hugs, love deb

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/14/2012 8:31:00 PM I think I remember this COOL tail-rhyme. Big congrats, Deborah. Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 11:28:00 PM lol...thank you Andrea!! :)

Ralph Taylor Date: 5/14/2012 6:13:00 PM Congrats on your well deserved win, Deb. Awesome. Nice going. Thanks for your comment. hugs, Ralph Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 7:54:00 PM :) thank you Ralph!! you are always so very welcome! big hugs, love ya deb

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 5/14/2012 5:30:00 PM Congratulations on your awesome piece,Deb...Ride on Lady...XOXO..... Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 5/14/2012 5:29:00 PM Congratulations on your awesome piece,Deb...Ride on Lady...XOXO..... Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 7:53:00 PM :) thank you so very much Olusequn!! lol...big hugs, love ya , deb

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/14/2012 3:43:00 PM Great winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 7:52:00 PM Thank you so much Sara...hope things are improving ...you are still in my prayers hun, love ya, deb

Debra Squyres Date: 5/14/2012 2:43:00 PM Great tail-rhyme poem....like the message !! lol....sick em!! lol.... Congrats on your winning place !!! Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 7:51:00 PM :) thank you Debra! very much ...big hugs, love ya , deb

Carrie Richards Date: 5/14/2012 2:02:00 PM Great job, Deb....go get 'em !!! Congratulations on your win! ps....love your Avatar picture!!! beautiful !! Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 2:19:00 PM lol...thank you Carrie! :) *blush* ahhh, thanks...I'm really picture shy and don't allow pics of me but I opted for one for the soup! this was taken Saturday... big hugss...love ya deb

Kash Poet Date: 5/14/2012 11:21:00 AM Very good Tail Rhyme here Deb.Congrats on your big win! Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 11:48:00 AM thank you Kashi :)

David Williams Date: 5/14/2012 11:20:00 AM cap'n Deb huge congrats on your win..David Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 11:48:00 AM :) thank you David...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 5/14/2012 10:43:00 AM Congrats on your win Debs xx Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 11:47:00 AM thank you ~GG~ :)

Terry O'Leary Date: 5/14/2012 10:06:00 AM Nobody should mess with a poetess like you...Terry Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/14/2012 10:23:00 AM lol...ahhh you are too kind Terry...huggsss, love ya...deb

Wilma Neels Date: 5/6/2012 2:49:00 PM Deb, you need to give me the inside scoop in case I need "special ops" lol enjoyed this loads tonight ;) love Wilma Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 5/2/2012 5:59:00 PM sweet revenge! Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 5/2/2012 5:16:00 PM Girl, remind me not to Tee you off! Nifty write. Like the dark twist. Sure to get some well deserved high marks. Hugs, Cyndi Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 5/2/2012 10:07:00 AM this is different, Deborah, and a pleasure to read. harry Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 5/2/2012 2:04:00 AM Oohh Captain in special ops now he he he...David Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/1/2012 11:39:00 PM hey this is a very interesting one. unique topic, Deborah! Good luck in Susan's contest. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/1/2012 6:30:00 PM So cute and funny! And a very subtle use of end rhyme! Light & Love Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/1/2012 9:22:00 PM :) thank you so much Debbie! I savor all your encouragements...big hugs, love debby

Russell Sivey Date: 5/1/2012 5:16:00 PM Nice, sweet write my friend! I rather thought your poem to be stupendous and uniquely lovely! I love your write tons! The line I enjoyed the most is, "For all the holes your burned in it" a prime example of an experienced poet! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Great Work!! Login to Reply Deborah Burch Date: 5/1/2012 9:19:00 PM Thank you so much dear Russell! It does my heart good to always read your comments of encouragement...Thank you...you've been missed here on the soup :) big hugs,love deb

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