Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Narrative

- Special Camping Trip -

                                 - I am brave and big boy
                                 - Can I go camping
                                 - Adrian my smallest  grandchild
                                 - I can do it myself
                                 - Where are you going 
                                 - Not very far
                                 - In the garden at great grandmother
                                 - Great grandmother is dead my little friend
                                 - Yes, I know
                                 - The place that she has her gravestone
                                    there will I set up my tent
                                 - At night, I would tell her that I still miss her





            A true small story ...
            Children have many beautiful thoughts and question
         -  However, there became no camping



14,07,2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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Timothy Aull October 13, 2013 at 11:13 PM It is definitely good to see things from a child's perspective sometimes because I believe that as we get older we tend to over complicate things and children just seem to make thing simpler. Beautiful story thanks for sharing. Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2013 at 3:49 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey September 4, 2013 at 10:29 PM You are so gifted with the lovely words of innosence.. love your poem :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2013 at 2:05 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Karen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Heather Secrest July 28, 2013 at 4:15 PM Cildren think of the world in such a beautiful way! Sweet poem! -Heather Anne-Lise Andresen July 30, 2013 at 9:31 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Heather. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Betty Bateson July 25, 2013 at 12:51 PM That is so sweet and touching. Betty Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 12:59 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Betty. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed July 18, 2013 at 6:48 AM Great story my dear.Loved it! Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2013 at 6:50 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Mustapha. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway July 18, 2013 at 3:16 AM a very loving boy...very cute story friend Anne Lise :) thanks for sharing this..Have a blessed day!!! Hugs, Maria Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2013 at 3:52 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Maria. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock July 17, 2013 at 8:52 PM This is cute and kids do say things that make us smile. It shows how much he thought about grandma that he wanted to tent by her. Precious. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2013 at 3:51 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Phyllis. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan July 17, 2013 at 10:07 AM A great story. I really like the "dialogue." It may seem odd, but I really like graveyards. I spent a lot of time in one after my father's death. I even learned to drive there. It's difficult to hit anyone in a cemetery... Jack Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2013 at 10:11 AM - It is not allowed to drive on Norwegian graveyards ... no camping either....lol... - Thank you for reading my small story Jack. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Manel Gunatillake July 17, 2013 at 9:56 AM Oh! what a story. Children are fearless, full of imagination. The last line is very powerful. Entire episode is based on his tremendous love for the grand mother. touchy. thanks for sharing your experience. And tahnk you for your lovely comments Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2013 at 9:58 AM .... Great grandmother. - Thank you for reading my small story Manel. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards July 17, 2013 at 8:49 AM What a tender little story. I can picture it so well.......what a sweet child this is! Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2013 at 9:01 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Carrie.- Yes, he is very sweet !!! - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May July 17, 2013 at 7:08 AM a touching write Anne.....best wishes Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2013 at 7:19 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Joseph. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones July 16, 2013 at 11:42 AM I find this very angelic as well..very special... Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2013 at 11:55 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Donna. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2013 at 8:58 AM have a great day, anne!..:) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2013 at 10:05 AM ... the same to you, Nette......:) huggs

Jack Ellison July 16, 2013 at 5:59 AM This warms our hearts my dear Anne Lise. A lovely write so well expressed... hugs, Jack xoxox Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2013 at 6:59 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Jack. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tim Ryerson July 16, 2013 at 3:19 AM This is a real gem Anne...I have twin great-grandsons...Once when they were around 5 yrs old and my wife was still alive, she unknowingly had a rip in the rear of her jeans...James walked over to her when she was cooking, tugged on her shirt and whispered "Maw-maw, your pants are broke"...Priceless - Tim Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2013 at 3:23 AM .... lol...yes, they are sweet ! - Thank you for reading my small story my friend Tim. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian July 16, 2013 at 2:03 AM How sweet, Anne Lise...How sweet. We can learn so much from the simplicity of a child...HUGS Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2013 at 3:20 AM - Thank you for reading my small story my friend Eileen. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath July 15, 2013 at 11:52 AM Very heartfelt poem wonderfully worded. Little children have curiosity always. Loved this poem much and much. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 11:54 AM - Thank you for reading my small story bl. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo July 15, 2013 at 11:28 AM This is very touching and heartfelt. The little children say things without malice. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 11:30 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Lucilla. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gary Wayne Hill July 15, 2013 at 11:05 AM A wonderful story, how the innocence of a child can often be the most inspiring of all, alas I would not let Luke anywhere near any graveyard, or at the very least check he hadn't packed a shovel :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 11:10 AM .....lol... !!!!!!! - Thank you for reading my small story Gary. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun July 15, 2013 at 10:30 AM This is a very beautiful and touching poem my dear friend Anne Lise! I love it. Yes, children most of the time have great & amazing thoughts. They're really adorable. Thank you so much for sharing! I so much enjoyed. Big big hugs to you! love lots, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 10:31 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Leonora. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito July 15, 2013 at 10:22 AM OMG! This was extremely heartwarming. I am flat stunned. Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 10:26 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Drake. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin July 15, 2013 at 9:53 AM Camping with grandmother - children are great. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 10:10 AM ....no, not camping with Grandma .....- Thanks for your visit Daver. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud July 15, 2013 at 9:24 AM sentimental and gracious in its poetic progression, anne.... our family used to stay overnight in my grandma and dad's grave... moving me no end.; simply endearing... have a great monday with huggs!.:.) Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 10:08 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Nette. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman July 15, 2013 at 8:42 AM Touching write... It'll echo in my mind... Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 10:08 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Carol. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve July 15, 2013 at 7:23 AM 'Out of the mouth of babes oft times come gems.' They certaintly say remarkable and insightful things. Anne thank you for sharing this incredible narrative poem. I so enjoyed reading it this morning. Warm Smiles, Connie Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 7:33 AM - Thank you for reading my small story Connie. - I thank Adrian for his "golden nuggets" - He always gives me pleasure. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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